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Compensation and Metaphors - with Her
In a time zone of spiritual compensation
Like a veiled tapestry of a carousel horse
On a canvas of fluttering butterflies
The rhapsody of the sunrise
Shimmers broadly
Along blades of flowing branches
Winging with nature’s blue sails
Across clouds in an hourglass
Of marigolds and willows
Partaking of the abundance
Of God’s gifts
The Jubilee of Bumblebees
Sing a harmonious melody
At home with the earth’s soul
Inheriting creek stones
In the air of the evergreen metaphors
Like a veiled tapestry of a carousel horse
On a canvas of fluttering butterflies
The rhapsody of the sunrise
Shimmers broadly
Along blades of flowing branches
Winging with nature’s blue sails
Across clouds in an hourglass
Of marigolds and willows
Partaking of the abundance
Of God’s gifts
The Jubilee of Bumblebees
Sing a harmonious melody
At home with the earth’s soul
Inheriting creek stones
In the air of the evergreen metaphors
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Re. Compensation and Metaphors - with Her
Like the "Jubilee of Bumblebees" bit. I have been tryng to follow the spirit of "No Mow May" (a green innovation in our country) whereby during the month we avoid mowing our lawns to allow the chance of our bees to pollinate with the flowers that will thus be freed to grow. I did today though have to do some mowing to create a straight path for the men I expect to to be replacing the fence that was blown down by Storm Arwen.
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14th May 2023 8:48pm
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Re. Compensation and Metaphors - with Her
15th May 2023 1:38am
I love how this turned out. Thank you for collaborating with me. It’s a privilege to write with you.
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Re. Compensation and Metaphors - with Her
16th May 2023 1:01am
Rather eloquent and mellifluous I think, nice syllabic harmonies as well. Well suited to the season. Thank you for recommending it to me.
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16th May 2023 1:27am