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Erotic Jazz
Sometimes I don't need a pen
Because there's no words
To express my secret desire
Give me a Saxophone
Because there's no words
To express my secret desire
Give me a Saxophone
Published 12th May 2023
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12th May 2023 4:03pm
Awwww definitely lust will be hidden in every tune coming out of the saxophone, which will touch your lips and flow in the air. Well the saxophone has always been a romantic instrument.. rather title itself so romantic well well nicely penned! Keep writing
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14th May 2023 2:03am
Dear PJ,
Felt this. To me, there are times words are too cumbersome and get in the way. But a dirty sax…now that’s communication needing no verbal.
Great write. Welcome to DUP.
H🌷
Felt this. To me, there are times words are too cumbersome and get in the way. But a dirty sax…now that’s communication needing no verbal.
Great write. Welcome to DUP.
H🌷
14th May 2023 7:05am
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24th May 2023 5:01am
8th Jul 2023 7:34am
With their suggestive shapes and a name that almost sounds like 'sex' (for sax) they can be erotic instruments to play on.
1st Aug 2023 9:28am
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1st Aug 2023 10:26pm
Oh yes! play me like a saxophone... blowing hard...
making the beautiful sounds come... again and again...
making the beautiful sounds come... again and again...
29th Aug 2023 5:34am
I'm read your poems always
Thanks for your comments
I will play for you always in my writing ♥️😊👍
Thanks for your comments
I will play for you always in my writing ♥️😊👍
25th Aug 2023 8:54pm
When a Sax is blown correctly it seduces all the other instruments. Hugs and peace, Oral
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14th Dec 2023 6:55am
Inspiration is wherever you find it!
Much respect to your journey
Naaj
Much respect to your journey
Naaj
