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Senryu - Newest Olympic Event
Scooch bum to front edge
plant feet, with arms and legs lift
comfy couch dismount
plant feet, with arms and legs lift
comfy couch dismount
Published 8th May 2023
Author's Note
Thought about Archery but opted for an event more suited to my current conditioning and proven excellence and yet still pushes me to my limit.
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8th May 2023 7:13am
8th May 2023 7:20am
Ha ha! Thank you. This came to me while practicing my other event of choice, wasting time binge watching MasterChef Australia.
8th May 2023 9:14am
Dear GW,
😂😂😂😂😂😂
This is a form of exercise with which I’m totally on board! I can’t wait to incorporate this move into my daily routine as I binge of The Crown. Love the light hearted spirit of this poem.
H🌷
😂😂😂😂😂😂
This is a form of exercise with which I’m totally on board! I can’t wait to incorporate this move into my daily routine as I binge of The Crown. Love the light hearted spirit of this poem.
H🌷
8th May 2023 11:07pm
Dearest, Honoria
Thank you so much. I m glad, nay pleased as punch, that you like this piece. Dang...I forgot about The crown. I was avoiding the whole Diana tragedy. Now I'll have to watch. I'm pretty sure that can evolve the comfy couch dismount into a team sport sponsored by Netflix...it'll be the new pickle ball.
Thank you so much. I m glad, nay pleased as punch, that you like this piece. Dang...I forgot about The crown. I was avoiding the whole Diana tragedy. Now I'll have to watch. I'm pretty sure that can evolve the comfy couch dismount into a team sport sponsored by Netflix...it'll be the new pickle ball.
9th May 2023 1:56am
Haha, well penned!
(As with any Olympic athlete, do it enough times and you can move where your limit is... 😉)
Love your sense of humor!
❤️k
(As with any Olympic athlete, do it enough times and you can move where your limit is... 😉)
Love your sense of humor!
❤️k
9th May 2023 4:36am
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16th May 2023 4:12am
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That you giggled with this piece makes me warmly tingle and smile imagining your smile and the sound of your laughter. Job done 😁 I am so pleased that you like the piece❣
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- Edited 1st Nov 2024 6:45pm
17th May 2023 2:40am
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17th May 2023 3:07am
