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Brown Sensations Everlasting
Brown sensations
My skin sensual beauty
Everlasting touch
~
Light touch, hand wonders
Remembering, just breathe, good
You are here for life
My skin sensual beauty
Everlasting touch
~
Light touch, hand wonders
Remembering, just breathe, good
You are here for life
Published 7th May 2023
Author's Note
Thought I would try my hand at a longer Senryu this time. Since it seems like a thing that people do. Seems fun so why not give it a go? Hope you enjoy!💜
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7th May 2023 4:01pm
Hoi hoi
Hope this finds you well…..
I am a story teller, 24 sentences is more the rule than the exception.
All the more the reason for loving to make senryu’s, higgeldy biggeldy (also a poem form).
And all that is why I alway stop by if somebody made something compact.
And I love these. Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus
Hope this finds you well…..
I am a story teller, 24 sentences is more the rule than the exception.
All the more the reason for loving to make senryu’s, higgeldy biggeldy (also a poem form).
And all that is why I alway stop by if somebody made something compact.
And I love these. Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus
7th May 2023 11:51pm
8th May 2023 2:47am
8th May 2023 8:52am
Oh…. Sorry.
Just meant to tell you that I love the way you make very compact poems work.
And ‘for instance’ things are hard sometimes in a language my mum didn’t teach me.
Think nothing of it. It was meant as a compliment.
Kind regards, Gus
Just meant to tell you that I love the way you make very compact poems work.
And ‘for instance’ things are hard sometimes in a language my mum didn’t teach me.
Think nothing of it. It was meant as a compliment.
Kind regards, Gus
8th May 2023 2:26pm
8th May 2023 1:08pm
8th May 2023 2:27pm
