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Spun From God's Weave - with adagio
Touch me in the twilight
below the moon's glowing halo.
Our breath stains the night
with silver condensation.
Beneath a quilt of sparkling dew.
Touch me with your soul and be
against the swooning willow tree.
In autumn's long sleeve sweater.
Falling, cascading are the leaves
through my dreams a gentle breeze.
A fabric of stars spun from God's weave.
below the moon's glowing halo.
Our breath stains the night
with silver condensation.
Beneath a quilt of sparkling dew.
Touch me with your soul and be
against the swooning willow tree.
In autumn's long sleeve sweater.
Falling, cascading are the leaves
through my dreams a gentle breeze.
A fabric of stars spun from God's weave.
Published 3rd May 2023
Author's Note
Many grand thanks to adagio for his amazing creativity.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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3rd May 2023 2:15am
3rd May 2023 2:43am
3rd May 2023 3:01am
i am inspired when i read what comes from the creative minds of you both.
3rd May 2023 3:27am
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3rd May 2023 11:16am
3rd May 2023 1:39pm
3rd May 2023 2:45pm
Yes I do feel like we are an ebb and flow.
I'm honored to write with adagio.
Thanks for reading!
I'm honored to write with adagio.
Thanks for reading!
3rd May 2023 6:39pm
Wow. Impressive and moving use of thematic metaphor here. There was a certain aesthetic to the environment on display. You can feel and imagine the yearning of your spirit. Language of the night comes to life with your disposition. To describe the intimacy of your feelings in such language is inspiring. So many things and ways, impassioned vicariously. I need to read more of your work. Anyway, I hope this is helpful!
3rd May 2023 7:57pm
Thank you ever so much from us both. We are currently working on another one. adagio uses beautiful language, that lays the groundwork for our creations.
Glad you enjoyed.
Glad you enjoyed.
