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Maius
Born from the gushing rain of Aprils departure.
The liquid of sad souls glistens against the window's pain.
Earth cries, as my terminal hope struggles to stay alive.
Violet gray clouds are glossed with morning light.
The sun in its relentless pursuit to prevail after the rains.
The dogwoods know the uncertainties of tomorrows.
The iris's know the incredulity of future days.
But they flaunt their beauty anyway.
The liquid of sad souls glistens against the window's pain.
Earth cries, as my terminal hope struggles to stay alive.
Violet gray clouds are glossed with morning light.
The sun in its relentless pursuit to prevail after the rains.
The dogwoods know the uncertainties of tomorrows.
The iris's know the incredulity of future days.
But they flaunt their beauty anyway.
Author's Note
May - all things seem possible
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Re. Maius
2nd May 2023 11:17am
Succinct, emotional, concise. A sense of yearning for truth and purpose. Inquisitive exploration of visual components, seemingly self-defining. Like a melancholic reflection of the spirit, pondering, waiting to belong, within creation. Very creative and original.
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Re: Re. Maius
2nd May 2023 11:42am
Thank you so much for all of your comments. I truly appreciate your critique.
I'm charged to write more, your commentary pulls to wake some confidence I've been lacking. Your understanding of poetry is impressive.
Today you made my morning 😊
I'm charged to write more, your commentary pulls to wake some confidence I've been lacking. Your understanding of poetry is impressive.
Today you made my morning 😊
Re: Re. Maius
2nd May 2023 11:58am
Hey, no problem. You really do hold your own, in terms of being original, individual, and unique with your creativity. A lot of the struggle with writing (at least for me) is maintaining inspiration. It's good that us writers and readers remind each other to keep writing and reading.
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Re. Maius
2nd May 2023 11:57am
Re: Re. Maius
2nd May 2023 1:18pm
Thank you so very much. Hope May is magic blossoming everywhere for you ..... 🌺
Re. Maius
2nd May 2023 1:32pm
Re: Re. Maius
2nd May 2023 1:56pm
Hi, thanks so much. Ending is my fav part too.
Appreciate you reading.
Have a great day
Appreciate you reading.
Have a great day
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