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Venus Garden
Venus Garden
O, lady , you have a very secret garden
Where blossoms the most fragrant flower
You defend your beauty with a guardian
Secure are you within a virgin bower
O,! lady your heart knows no pardon ..
Each time i approach, it will harden
You have stones rooted in your garden
That spoil the feel of your budding flower
I am the love sower, the hatred mower
Open, your rusted gate let me shower
It is Spring, my lady and you need water
Quench those lips that get much hotter !!!!
Venus of April, the breeze being shy ...
Your perfume, makes even the wind sigh !!!
I'll wait until Spring dies; then i will lie
If, of your nectar bereft, i shall die
--listen plz.
https://youtu.be/D3XCQvDZHUc
O, lady , you have a very secret garden
Where blossoms the most fragrant flower
You defend your beauty with a guardian
Secure are you within a virgin bower
O,! lady your heart knows no pardon ..
Each time i approach, it will harden
You have stones rooted in your garden
That spoil the feel of your budding flower
I am the love sower, the hatred mower
Open, your rusted gate let me shower
It is Spring, my lady and you need water
Quench those lips that get much hotter !!!!
Venus of April, the breeze being shy ...
Your perfume, makes even the wind sigh !!!
I'll wait until Spring dies; then i will lie
If, of your nectar bereft, i shall die
--listen plz.
https://youtu.be/D3XCQvDZHUc
Published 29th Apr 2023
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29th Apr 2023 11:44pm
I hope she doesn't keep you waiting too long! Love this poem of strong desire around springtime. Well written & good luck!
30th Apr 2023 4:17pm
Thank you Billy for the lovely visit,
this is s fantasy poem, for any woman and man to read and get inspired, stay happy always...
this is s fantasy poem, for any woman and man to read and get inspired, stay happy always...
Spring is when a young man's fancy turns to thoughts of love, or, as a past woman work colleague put it, 'what women have been thinking of the rest of the year"! The poem captures that spirit.
The second halves of these verses are my favourite lines:
You defend your beauty with a guardian
Secure are you within a virgin bower
You have stones rooted in your garden
That spoil the feel of your budding flower
It is Spring, my lady and you need water
Quench those lips that get much hotter !!!!
The second halves of these verses are my favourite lines:
You defend your beauty with a guardian
Secure are you within a virgin bower
You have stones rooted in your garden
That spoil the feel of your budding flower
It is Spring, my lady and you need water
Quench those lips that get much hotter !!!!
5th May 2023 4:59pm
Yes, my friend; and Spring flower is like woman, they have too short happiness, better they spend it in full bloom, life is one shot just
like a fancy, then fades away withering !
stay happy for ever,
BTW, this is about a woman worth all the poems.of admiration..
like a fancy, then fades away withering !
stay happy for ever,
BTW, this is about a woman worth all the poems.of admiration..
