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Untitled XXVI
Afraid.
Read that again.
Let it sink into the
pit of your stomach.
Are you—
Afraid.
So many things.
More than half
burnt stars,
fish prowling
deep seas.
Flippant.
Yes.
Slept many years
under ravenous
mountains, right
between earths
atmosphere
and fiery core.
These ideas tinge
fibers already colored
by shitty reality.
Anger sweeps
through, lightning
biting parched lips.
Afraid.
No.
Read that again.
Let it sink into the
pit of your stomach.
Are you—
Afraid.
So many things.
More than half
burnt stars,
fish prowling
deep seas.
Flippant.
Yes.
Slept many years
under ravenous
mountains, right
between earths
atmosphere
and fiery core.
These ideas tinge
fibers already colored
by shitty reality.
Anger sweeps
through, lightning
biting parched lips.
Afraid.
No.
Published 27th Apr 2023
Author's Note
I don’t even know what I’m writing at this point.
26/30
26/30
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- Edited 28th Mar 2025 1:50am
27th Apr 2023 1:16pm
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27th Apr 2023 5:58pm
I’m glad to know that you were able to make some sense of this nonsense! Appreciate you.
27th Apr 2023 1:38pm
You're almost there and you've done great. Terrific gravity in the images here.
27th Apr 2023 5:58pm
27th Apr 2023 6:00pm
Sounds tangible
Was hoping for a cosmic answer
We shall wait longer
I like it
BIG
X
Was hoping for a cosmic answer
We shall wait longer
I like it
BIG
X
28th Apr 2023 00:37am
6th May 2023 00:05am
It sounds like you are speaking of overcoming obstacles.
Well done.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Well done.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
23rd Jun 2023 8:45pm
When the subconscious speaks directly through the tips of your fingers.
I liked it alot.
I liked it alot.
