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Pleasent ride
after a friendship n long dating
the moments of wedding bells
room lifted the load of happiness n pleasure!
the moments of wedding bells
room lifted the load of happiness n pleasure!
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Re: Re. Pleasent ride
23rd Apr 2023 1:04pm
Re. Pleasent ride
23rd Apr 2023 12:56pm
"room lifted the load of happiness n pleasure!", I come back to this line for I can read it at least two ways....
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Re: Re. Pleasent ride
23rd Apr 2023 1:04pm
Carried the weight of happiness, which includes both peace and physical pleasure.
Re: Re. Pleasent ride
23rd Apr 2023 1:18pm
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23rd Apr 2023 4:03pm
Re. Pleasent ride
23rd Apr 2023 2:21pm
interesting and wonderful words
Pleasent ride : It makes me imagine those moments when lovers travel emotionally, longing and spiritually
after a friendship n long dating : This verse summarizes the understanding and harmony of two lovers in a sincere relationship
the moments of wedding bells : The verse continues the one before it and makes it clear that a sincere relationship and trust can succeed
room lifted the load of happiness n pleasure! : This verse explains that the pleasure and happiness after marriage is sweeter and more exciting for the two lovers together
Pleasent ride : It makes me imagine those moments when lovers travel emotionally, longing and spiritually
after a friendship n long dating : This verse summarizes the understanding and harmony of two lovers in a sincere relationship
the moments of wedding bells : The verse continues the one before it and makes it clear that a sincere relationship and trust can succeed
room lifted the load of happiness n pleasure! : This verse explains that the pleasure and happiness after marriage is sweeter and more exciting for the two lovers together
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Re: Re. Pleasent ride
23rd Apr 2023 2:50pm
Hello there
Thanks much for detailed description of my lines, that's awesome! I'm glad you enjoyed my each lines with your beautiful narration.
Thanks much for detailed description of my lines, that's awesome! I'm glad you enjoyed my each lines with your beautiful narration.
Re. Pleasent ride
23rd Apr 2023 3:38pm
room lifted the load of happiness n pleasure! - leaves to imagination what was going on in that room!
Like the order of relationship progression which would appeal to those who prefer the traditional path to sexual relationship between a couple.
Like the order of relationship progression which would appeal to those who prefer the traditional path to sexual relationship between a couple.
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23rd Apr 2023 5:56pm
Re. Pleasent ride
24th Apr 2023 2:09am
You two are truly in love forever and it makes the sex hotter and makes you reach new heights to paradise. Keep on writing.
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24th Apr 2023 2:12am
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24th Apr 2023 2:13am
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