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Flat soda - NaPoWriMo2023 #20
Ever had one of those days
that fails to live up to expectations?
Not a tone of death or disaster;
but merely disappointment,
summed up as
flat soda
and
lukewarm coffee
of life's buffet.
Again, not all that bad
all things considered;
such as abject poverty
or war-torn exile.
Yet enough to be an
inconvenience,
knowing you should be happy
for all the other blessings,
but today was just sub-par
at least its over now.
that fails to live up to expectations?
Not a tone of death or disaster;
but merely disappointment,
summed up as
flat soda
and
lukewarm coffee
of life's buffet.
Again, not all that bad
all things considered;
such as abject poverty
or war-torn exile.
Yet enough to be an
inconvenience,
knowing you should be happy
for all the other blessings,
but today was just sub-par
at least its over now.
Published 20th Apr 2023
Author's Note
Entry #20 for NaPoWriMo2023.
The day wasn't great, but thankfully the greater part is over.
The day wasn't great, but thankfully the greater part is over.
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21st Apr 2023 4:11am
Yep, there be days like that... you managed to weave some words out of it, anyway! Good job. Hope tomorrow is better.
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