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Crave
I want to take chances.
I want to taste the clarity of the water
The sweet taste of an apple and your lips.
I want to glance at the ocean and see your eyes with love.
I want to touch a flower and your face with my hands.
Smell honey and your neck.
I want to feel the air between my hair and your fingers caressing it.
Scream at the top of the mountain and whisper love songs in your ear.
I want to swim in warm waters and into your skin.
Reach heaven with you inside.
I want to fly the skies and into your heart.
Hear the mountain stream and your voice every sunset.
Dance in the sand and for you, my love.
I want to know God through you and me.
See children smile and make you smile every day.
I want to travel the world and your chest.
See, birds fly and fly into your soul.
I want to smell the salt and taste yours.
Run free and be free with you.
Crave by Cinthia Carolina
Book: Martinis, Sex & Poems - Stir The Fire Within
On Amazon
I want to taste the clarity of the water
The sweet taste of an apple and your lips.
I want to glance at the ocean and see your eyes with love.
I want to touch a flower and your face with my hands.
Smell honey and your neck.
I want to feel the air between my hair and your fingers caressing it.
Scream at the top of the mountain and whisper love songs in your ear.
I want to swim in warm waters and into your skin.
Reach heaven with you inside.
I want to fly the skies and into your heart.
Hear the mountain stream and your voice every sunset.
Dance in the sand and for you, my love.
I want to know God through you and me.
See children smile and make you smile every day.
I want to travel the world and your chest.
See, birds fly and fly into your soul.
I want to smell the salt and taste yours.
Run free and be free with you.
Crave by Cinthia Carolina
Book: Martinis, Sex & Poems - Stir The Fire Within
On Amazon
Written by
Cincarolina_76
(Cinthia-Carolina)
Published 17th Apr 2023
| Edited 24th Apr 2023
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Copyright © 2023 by Cinthia Carolina, LLC
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17th Apr 2023 6:03pm
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17th Apr 2023 8:49pm
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17th Apr 2023 9:40pm
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17th Apr 2023 9:55pm
Dear C,
I really enjoyed your poem. Your sense of combining the tangible with the intangible is lovely. It created so much wonderful imagery. I look forward to reading more of your work. Welcome to DUP.
H🌷
I really enjoyed your poem. Your sense of combining the tangible with the intangible is lovely. It created so much wonderful imagery. I look forward to reading more of your work. Welcome to DUP.
H🌷
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17th Apr 2023 10:03pm
The repeat of I want lends it a rolling, dynamic energy that is engaging, the details bring the piece to life. Great work.
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17th Apr 2023 10:10pm
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17th Apr 2023 10:30pm
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17th Apr 2023 10:33pm
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17th Apr 2023 10:42pm
Wonderful love poem
Consistent writing and balanced verses
I enjoyed reading and re-reading it
Do not stop making us happy with your writing
Consistent writing and balanced verses
I enjoyed reading and re-reading it
Do not stop making us happy with your writing
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18th Apr 2023 1:03am
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17th Apr 2023 11:46pm
Wonderful love poem. In particular, I thought the image of fingers running through the hair of the narrator was beautiful and sensual.
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18th Apr 2023 1:04am
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18th Apr 2023 4:08am
What a beautiful poem. I am looking forward to many more and I plan to read your book, too. Peace
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18th Apr 2023 4:46am
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18th Apr 2023 5:58am
hey there
excellent read
i admire your stuff
sensual and elegant piece.
i just loved it. keep writing
excellent read
i admire your stuff
sensual and elegant piece.
i just loved it. keep writing
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18th Apr 2023 6:24am
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18th Apr 2023 5:59am
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18th Apr 2023 6:18am
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18th Apr 2023 6:25am
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18th Apr 2023 3:30pm
Well penned... great flow... love the repetition... woven in just right... welcome to DUP...
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18th Apr 2023 10:10pm
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22nd Apr 2023 5:06pm
This is beautiful! I enjoyed how the lines attached the senses and the actions towards your subject. "I want to do/feel this AND do this to you"
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22nd Apr 2023 5:11pm