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Ra! Ra! Siss Boom Awe!

Yes, I know it's ra ra siss boom bah.
awe is more appropriate, I postulate
it better captures the emotions and thrill of fireworks exploding,
transforming the night sky into a kaleidoscope of brilliant colors.

The only phrase I know that contains a single "bah" is bah humbug
In no way does that Scroogian saying
Illustrate elation or even tepid excitement
It’s an anti-firework, a dud

Okay, done and dusted
I didn’t mean this to be
a dissection of an old fashioned
cheerleading spiel
I simply want you to know
I’m in your corner
encouraging success
In awe of you and your magnificent talent
Written by Gahddess_Worship (Osomajestuoso)
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Author's Note
NaPo 2023 #16. Gotta be silly sometimes.
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