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Ra! Ra! Siss Boom Awe!

Yes, I know it's ra ra siss boom bah.
awe is more appropriate, I postulate
it better captures the emotions and thrill of fireworks exploding,
transforming the night sky into a kaleidoscope of brilliant colors.

The only phrase I know that contains a single "bah" is bah humbug
In no way does that Scroogian saying
Illustrate elation or even tepid excitement
It�s an anti-firework, a dud

Okay, done and dusted
I didn�t mean this to be
a dissection of an old fashioned
cheerleading spiel
I simply want you to know
I�m in your corner
encouraging success
In awe of you and your magnificent talent

Written by Gahddess_Worship

(Osomajestuoso)

Published 17th Apr 2023

Author's Note

NaPo 2023 #16. Gotta be silly sometimes.

#funny #happiness #NaPoWriMo2023 #PowerOfWords

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Re. Ra! Ra! Siss Boom Awe!

Honoria

17th Apr 2023 5:05am

Dear GW,

2! 4! 6! 8! Who do we appreciate?!
Will I make the squad with this oldie but goodie? I enjoyed the light hearted enthusiasm and approach in this poem. It was just the ticket to sit back and chill. H🌷