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lovely one
jilted silence weeps in eternity
so far from me now I can barely hear
I always feel the distinct movements of my immortal
instinct leads me forward into the vast unknown
I want to reach out to caress but it's too painful now
I am chaste of vision, worried about the future
I fear I don't know as well as I thought
midnight strikes the djinns
and I smile I can hear the drumming of thunder
I will always love this earth
it's where I learned to love again
still guarding the garden dream
while reaching the fates
casting for my future
I'm learning to hone my magic
as requested, so that our destination becomes more clear
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Re. lovely one
16th Apr 2023 2:26pm
Always best to keep your eye on the ball.............even if it is in your dreams.
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16th Apr 2023 2:48pm
you guys are all very different I'm so happy to see clearer...my visions are more stable now and I can see you all again... wow you guys in a lot of ways have become wiser... I apologize Robert but we are all on soul journeys thank you for being here today ❤️
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16th Apr 2023 3:29pm
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16th Apr 2023 5:44pm
Hi Beautiful Debbie my name is Brenda you can call me bren if you like...you know people used to mistake me for Debra... anyway thank you love you lady ❤️
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16th Apr 2023 6:32pm
Ok beautiful Bren. My full name is Deborah. But I go by Debbie.
Have a lovely day 🌹
Have a lovely day 🌹
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18th Apr 2023 1:10am
Crimsin, out of the storm this reads to me as a light shining in your heart and setting out on a journey of healing. You will make it my friend. I have complete faith in you.
John
John
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Re. lovely one
26th May 2023 3:45pm
Those inner workings reflections and thought about live really do give a redefining element for the reader.
Great spill
Great spill
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