The delicacy of sweet anarchy.

Perfect, my dear Blue.


hugs,
buddhakitty

big ol Hugs, lovely bk
Thank you
🌹 💙 💙

This is absolutely gorgeous, Blue!  I wish you all the best in the comp!

Awww, thank you, dear Luna!
I appreciate those kind words a great deal. I'm truly grateful for the generous RL add as well.
And right back at you... good luck to you, too! 🍀


(Btw, are you unable to edit your comments? I keep getting an error message when I try. I make way too many mistakes to not be able to edit, that's for sure!!
Just curious! Thanks. )

I’ve had trouble editing them since the site update; hopefully that gets fixed as they work out the bugs!

👍🏻

You are a Goddess of the flowing ink, absolutely awesome
Love and light
Ron xc

You're pure loveliness, my brave Knight!
Thank you thank you.

I'm so glad you enjoyed reading! Using the competition rules (no mentioning of body parts or profanity) was a fun challenge. I know it's over the top but I couldn't help myself... hahaha...

Much love and appreciation from across the pond ✨
(Hope you are doing well, Ron)

🌹💙-B

I'm intoxicated on every word. Holy wow! That was so spectacular, I need to read it again and again.

Ohh, D!
You're beyond kind and such a darling sweetheart. You had me giggle @ 'Holy wow!' I deeply appreciate that exclamation! You honor me with such consequential feedback.

Seriously, thank you, lady.
So very glad you enjoyed it.

🌹💙 💙
-B

It was even more supreme the second read 😊

Damn, lady... You are ridiculously awesome... - 🤗😘🤗

Beautiful passion in this one.

Love this phrase:

“entangled energies
bow, twist and conform,”

Anarchy is one of my favorite words.
(along with ambrosia and anachronisms)
❣️
❣️🙏

This one gave me a cool challenge that I don't think I've really tried to tackle before-writing something alluring or erotic with the comp limitations of not using any body parts or profanity... I guess I didn't realize how much I might have relied on either!!

That line you chose made me happy in how it worked in conveying this specific idea, one I'm glad you connected to as well!

Yes, Anarchy and ambrosia are favorites of mine as well! For some reason I've always fancied the word debauchery... it just drips sexy to me! Ooooo, anachronism is fantastic! The dichotomy, right?! (another favorite word... lol )

Loved chatting with you KP
So so happy you visited!
🌹 💙 💙

👏 👏 👏 👏 absolutely queen 👸 🙌 great 👍 ink spill please ♥ keep 👏 on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖

Wow! What cool and kind comments -I'm delighted that you found something that you enjoyed.

Thank you for taking the time to share that with me!

🌹B

a most enjoyable and stimulating tongue lashing....L

Oooooo... I do love that comment, so!
Thanks for the big ol smile, Lawrence... I'm thrilled to have stimulate!d!

🌹💙 💙
-B

A priceless poetic gem Blue... I hope all is well and a wonderful weekend

I'm hanging in there, thanks for asking! The weekend is lovely so far... Glad you felt this piece like you have, it's extremely kind that you've stopped by to say so.

Much thanks,
🌹💙

You're welcome anytime...

Great piece of erotica, Oh Blue
Enjoy reading your verses

Much obliged, MP

I'm glad you found something here, enjoyable.

🌹B

I wish that can be you and me.  My mind is on fire.  Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.

Ohhh you charmer, you!

Thanks for the flirty comments! I know I can always count on you, Francisco.

🌹B

I'm your sexy charmer.  You need to be given orgasmic bliss over and over again. You also need to be pampered with homemade food and drinks.

Oh sweet fucking shitballs. This is really fabulous.

I love the fucking Easter eggs.
The narrator casts a prayer, a spell, a manifestation of pure lust, incarnate.
The anarchy is the fuck-you to the natural order of the universe, and respositioning it to have the lovers, you know, do lovers things.
These pieces come together spectacularly?

“beckon hallelujah's ache

-a flint spark incantation-
calls out  

manifesting you... us

ardent whimpers
being lost amongst Gods

sacred prayers
[ring out!]


Forged as one,

HOLY FUCK THAT WAS SO GOOD! The [ring out!] was such a bold declaration, and it was spicy!

LOVED it!

You've single handedly changed the trajectory of my shitty night with your badassery, Betty.... thank you - 💙

*Receiving such incredible feedback really means a lot to me, especially coming from you. I used to daydream about the writer I stumbled upon long after they seemingly disappeared DUP, leaving behind my (hands down) favorite poems which made such a huge difference to me with their mpact. Those poems showed me that accessing your pain or pleasure in honest human conveyance was exactly how great writing should be & feel. You unknowingly helped me to be less afraid. I never ever thought in a million years that I'd get the amazing opportunity to connect and share those thoughts to you specifically - I think I might have mentioned something to that affect to you when you first returned last summer; how much I admire your ink and how it blows my mind that you're here now, creating new outstanding poetry daily, the quality of which, leaves me speechless...but maybe not my whole truth-when it comes to your writing/poetry I was/am a total fan girl, who know tends to gush with uncomfortable praise (sorry/not sorry) for the soul reason that it comes from that place, of a pipe dream, that's actually come true for me...

I hope that isn't tmi... lol.
Promise this will be my last fan girl opus... ;)


You're epic and yes, one badass Betty.
Again, thank you.
🌹-S

You can fangirl anytime you want, beautiful.

I think you have such incredible power and talent, and it makes me feel all blushy and shit to hear you say that. Leaving it all on the page is an incredible thing, hard to do without holding back, and you are a master of it.

Be well my dear
😘-E

hello beautiful Blue this is delicate and bold
it's very deeply passionate
my mind hasn't been working right lately
I'm a schizo witch... I'm grateful your beauty
and that you're here...❤️

Hey there, Bren...

Sometimes we all need to take time to get ourselves recalibrated, dear lady. I know your struggles can weigh heavy and leave you feeling off and discombobulated.... Take with you the knowledge that we're all here rooting for you and your witchcraft to realign, allowing you to feel like things are working better.

I adore you to pieces and thank you so much for the lovely comments and your kind heart.

Please take care of yourself
(hugs)
🌹💙 💙
-B

thank you beautiful I look forward to soul searching again while also loving you guys I need to let go of my past angers it does no good to hold it in...thank you for letting me vent...you really are an accomplished poetess and a beautiful lady too ❤️

Dear B,

Jesus! I need a cigarette and a scotch! And a nice cold shower! This is some mighty hot and fabulous writing. I concur with all the above comments. They sum up anything I could’ve said, only better. Just one thing, where can I buy one if these sultry man sirens?
I wish you all the best in this comp. It’s an awesome write. H🌷

hahaha..🤭 . You made me literally made me laugh out loud with that opening, H!!

Thanks for feeling the heat as I so hoped (and tried my best) to convey. There's always Facebook marketplace... heh heh heh...( I tease) ..It's funny because they say you can find anything on there!! I should maybe check it more often...??🤷🏻‍♀️

I'm all smiles that you found this piece in the genre it's intended, that means the world.

Love reading your NaPo pieces, you're doing a helluva a job! Hang in there, dear lady!

Much love sent your way ✨
🌹 B

The rhythms of lovemaking are gorgeously majestically encompassed in images and sensations that convey a feast of eroticism. The pain-pleasure axiom is subtly induced in a torrent of emotional dreams like a synchrony of passion served hot as a spicy chili pepper in the midst of a delectable imminent being to savor. The flood of sensual imagery took me into a timeless intimacy of golden heat. Love where this took me tonight. The pleasure was mine in the reading my darling friend. Better than Bach on a Sunday bed frolic morning.  
   
Much love to you always,  
John

My dear friend,  

You've now left me listening to classical music and lost deep in my imagination's penchant for dreamy/steamy fantasy, sparked in large part by your phenomenal feedback.  

I love love LOVE that you devoured my thought process and found it as tasty and delicious as you have, that itself, is it's own reward.  

Thank you for sharing your incredibly motivational comments and for always taking the time to be here with me.... I look forward to it, always.  

Much love and all my warmest appreciation, John.  
💙-Susan

If the tag for BDSM wasn't there, I feel like no one would have a clue at all, as to what I was really thinking when I was writing. Which is aok, to me. We humans all relate to art, poetry, music, etc.. based upon our own experiences, so I think whatever someone feels; how it impacts them, (if it even does) will always be the right answer, in the end.  

Thanks for the kindness in stopping in, leaving your thoughts and for the generous list add... I appreciate it and you!

Hope you are doing well,  
🌹💙
-B

Hoi hoi
I’m with @Deliabear
Sometimes it pays off to read a poem one or two days later for the second time.
And I did it with a lot of pleasure.
Thank you for making this place a feast!
Kind regards, Gus

Hoi hoi
I think that's really astute and something I do, as well. Sometimes I come back to a poem from someone else days or weeks later, even... and possibility get something new from it. That's another reason why I love this art form... It's fluid, like a painting or a sculpture... the art of it, is in the eye of the beholder.... And in my life that's as it should be.

Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and for being here with me, Gus.

It means a lot to me... to have you visit.
Much love and appreciation,

🌹 💙 💙
xo

Dearest, Lady Blue❣ This is a delicious melange of so many enticing sweet and spicy flavors and heady aromas.  It's like a meal that you never want to end. I have used "entangled," "enmeshed," and "interwoven"  in so many poems because they so closely approximate the closeness of the sensual experience. With this passage you have taken the concept to a whole new captivating and thrilling level, "as entangled energies
bow, twist and conform,
crisscrossing themselves
into combustible calculation
masterfully sharing rapturous reins"
Oh my how that gets my blood pumping🫀🫀🫀
And this is that dollop of whipped cream with a cherry on top, "feasting upon swirls
long and plentiful"
Please, please, please record this one🙏🙏🙏
A true BB spectacular display of erotic poetry prowess🐻💞🐰

Like a conductor (master) in a maestro fashion intensifying the symphony until a crescendo is reached.

The want to be “erotically pillaged”; total surrender. Overwhelmed by force, a feeble defense, just for show, does not get in the way of what you truly desire.  Finally, all your infernal lusts, discreetly disguised, can be displayed by you too yourself and your liberator.

A wonderous sight when looking through the slats. xxoo 0088

PS. Like your B&W avatar pic.

You're a gifted inspector.... full stop


What you see is much and many, indeed. However, I wonder if it's possible that you might see only what the subject wants you to see... Strategic slat placement, and all.... *wink

To say you yourself are wonderfully captivating, is putting it mildly dear Leo.

Thank you for your in depth synopsis, it's such an enormous pleasure for me to read your thoughts and personal opinions... - 💙

(I'm delighted you like my ai generated avatar... she's definitely a badass!)

Loads of love and continued hopes for possible... 'visits'
🔍🕵🏻‍♂️🔎

🌹B

As the kids say nowadays. I’m shook. Stirring piece in delivery and imagination. Luckily I didn’t have any skittles with me to drop on the floor.

Absolutely stunning verse blue.