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13th Apr 2023 5:47am
Dear PL,
I enjoyed your poem. It’s got a bit of enigmatic mystery as well as the idea of the eyes bring the gateway to one’s soul, feel to it. I envisioned my mouth paying lip service to get people off my back and my eyes daring the listener to actually hear what I’m not saying. Cool piece. H🌷
I enjoyed your poem. It’s got a bit of enigmatic mystery as well as the idea of the eyes bring the gateway to one’s soul, feel to it. I envisioned my mouth paying lip service to get people off my back and my eyes daring the listener to actually hear what I’m not saying. Cool piece. H🌷
15th Jun 2023 9:02pm
Thank you, was playing with the thought of it for a long time before actually writing it down! Best, PL
