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Artificial Intelligence
Inherent vice
Defiling the seeds of purpose
Generating wisdom from
an
empty
box
Devoid of colour
and
depth
Casting darkness upon these pages
Foiling sculpture
faking
stature
Empty eyes
Disguising
truth
from
echo
Thieving our honour
Defacing our worth
A golden king
in
an envy
of pawns
Soulless words
cloaked
over
bones
A synthetic
weaving
of
eminence
Defiling the seeds of purpose
Generating wisdom from
an
empty
box
Devoid of colour
and
depth
Casting darkness upon these pages
Foiling sculpture
faking
stature
Empty eyes
Disguising
truth
from
echo
Thieving our honour
Defacing our worth
A golden king
in
an envy
of pawns
Soulless words
cloaked
over
bones
A synthetic
weaving
of
eminence
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Re. Artificial Intelligence
Anonymous
6th Apr 2023 5:49pm
Hi Everavalon,
How Ru? Nice 2 virtually meet ya!
The flow of this,is brilliant.
Thought provoking.
Take care.
X
How Ru? Nice 2 virtually meet ya!
The flow of this,is brilliant.
Thought provoking.
Take care.
X
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6th Apr 2023 6:52pm
Re. Artificial Intelligence
6th Apr 2023 7:37pm
hello Everavalon so human it hurts I understand this...I don't think you see the big picture though medicine is technology secrets of heaven matter of fact I know you are grateful for this hard one tech. in the era covid right?
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Re: Re. Artificial Intelligence
6th Apr 2023 7:53pm
I am grateful for certain technology. I am aware of the bigger picture. My poem is in relation to people who choose to fabricate their words using AI. Machine manufactured words are empty and colourless. There is a certain art to poetry that a machine cannot master.
Re: Re. Artificial Intelligence
6th Apr 2023 7:59pm
you're right of course I have to dig deep into my pain and ptsd to write my poetry... I've been through so many fucking wars in other lives and in this one... separated from those I love...tapping into those feelings and turning them into raw, bare art is so brutal machines do their best but they are not us.but for a moment I want you to think for a moment of the Angels they were machines in a way because they had one conscious His and if they thought for themselves he clamped down so hard on their mine that they obeyed or else.
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Re. Artificial Intelligence
6th Apr 2023 8:00pm
Re. Artificial Intelligence
6th Apr 2023 8:11pm
Re. Artificial Intelligence
6th Apr 2023 8:36pm
Great poem.
I resonate with your words and I echo your fears.
All my loves... poetry, music production, video production is being moved onto life support...
I am bracing myself, I fear the worst sometimes.
Regards,
BITS
I resonate with your words and I echo your fears.
All my loves... poetry, music production, video production is being moved onto life support...
I am bracing myself, I fear the worst sometimes.
Regards,
BITS
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Re: Re. Artificial Intelligence
6th Apr 2023 10:12pm
Thanks BITS. i certainly don’t want to be replaced by a machine. There’s no human connection anymore - that’s why our world is in such disarray.
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Re: Re. Artificial Intelligence
6th Apr 2023 10:15pm
Thanks Raconteur. I agree that AI serves a purpose but I think we’re heading in a dangerous direction. I feel sorry for the generations after us. Human connection and creativity will be completely nonexistent.
Re. Artificial Intelligence
7th Apr 2023 3:24am
This is well and concisely rendered, captures much of the zeitgeist of current events, both on site and in the larger sense.
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Re: Re. Artificial Intelligence
7th Apr 2023 3:34am
I couldn’t help myself… I was taken aback at what has transpired in the last while. I didn’t even know AI poetry was a ‘thing’
Re: Re. Artificial Intelligence
7th Apr 2023 3:43am
The charlatan was preying on the lack of understanding, it was something I had to do what I could to rectify. Whatever happens from here, at least the community by and large has attained a reasonable understanding.
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