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Cup of company
There are clouds in my coffee today, I can see them in the reflection of my reflection, rising with the steam
Maybe if I lean over just right, my curls will trap us both
I'll drift away on the sweet, rich scent of it & smile, just like I do when I think of your silly
bare feet
Published 29th Mar 2023
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Artwork by Pat Kelley
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Dead K,
This makes me think of all the quiet times I allow myself to reflect on the kinder things in life. Really centers things for me in a way nothing else can. The lovely details you include in this write are brief but so effective you can almost smell the coffee. Lovely write. H🌷
This makes me think of all the quiet times I allow myself to reflect on the kinder things in life. Really centers things for me in a way nothing else can. The lovely details you include in this write are brief but so effective you can almost smell the coffee. Lovely write. H🌷
2nd Apr 2023 3:10am
Those moments are magical really, and precious. We must treasure every single one, thanks for sharing them with me, always love your comments!
30th Mar 2023 2:44am
Really nicely written. And the ending was a playful way to sum up the mood.
Great job.
Great job.
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