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The Release

Our memories together
Traverse my being like a torch of fire
Illuminating, consuming and conquering
And as emptiness slithers quietly unto my core
Allow me to write the things
embedded in my soul
A release Ive been longing to forge
A sweet escape in this melancholic world

And amidst this pitch black night
I would surround myself with the lullabyes of your goodbyes
Till pillows are drenched in tears
And a realization is always met
That you are best released
So i could find and satiate myself
For a new beginning for me awaits.

(C)mai3.22.23

Written by Mayumi

Published 22nd Mar 2023

#courage #hope #redemption #strength #TimeHeals

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Re. The Release

Solomon_Song

- Edited 22nd Mar 2023 1:09pm

22nd Mar 2023 1:08pm

Could be read as thoughts on letting go a relationship, or an anticipation of a night of passion as escapism from a humdrum existence. Consider the lines:

Our memories together
Traverse my being like a torch of fire
Illuminating, consuming and conquering
And as emptiness slithers quietly unto my core.....
A release Ive been longing to forge
A sweet escape in this melancholic world

And amidst this pitch black night
I would surround myself with the lullabyes of your goodbyes
Till pillows are drenched in tears
And a realization is always met
That you is best released
So i could find and satiate myself
For a new beginning for me awaits.