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Rain

The cold drops hit my face
The wind starts kissing the rain  
I wonder how that water feels  
And if it's crying in pain
 
I watch them create a puddle  
The birds go for a swim
I would challenge them to a tearing contest
But I know they would win  
 
My skin is getting the chills
But the garden is relieved  
The feeling of replenishment
I can see it on the leaves
 
The determination of the weather  
Shows by the clouds getting darker
I started to hear the voice of reason  
As the rain poured harder
 
So, I listened  
As it was washing away my question's
I never thought in my life
That rain could teach me a lesson
Written by Longblackhair6 (DMT)
Published | Edited 7th Apr 2023
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Originally written:4/24/17
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