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Soul Fire
Soul Fire
California bathes in the light of her soul
Where strawberry blonde tresses grow like wildflowers
Camellias run loose in fields of hay
Where lipstick is the blood moon
In a crescent phase from long ago
Whose moonbeams are vessels of light
That still gleam in her eyes
Now a smoky flame of gothic beauty
Impervious to the calcification of bones
Unconquerable by the weeds of time
California bathes in the light of her soul
Where strawberry blonde tresses grow like wildflowers
Camellias run loose in fields of hay
Where lipstick is the blood moon
In a crescent phase from long ago
Whose moonbeams are vessels of light
That still gleam in her eyes
Now a smoky flame of gothic beauty
Impervious to the calcification of bones
Unconquerable by the weeds of time
Published 28th Feb 2023
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28th Feb 2023 6:38am
Hi Goldenmyst,
I enjoyed your poem. Very dreamy and alluring.
Where lipstick is the blood moon
In a crescent phase from long ago ..... brilliantly clever image.
Unconquerable by the weeds of time...... That line is akin to finishing the song with a high note.
Pure defiance and indomitable. Fair play. Enjoyable read.
I enjoyed your poem. Very dreamy and alluring.
Where lipstick is the blood moon
In a crescent phase from long ago ..... brilliantly clever image.
Unconquerable by the weeds of time...... That line is akin to finishing the song with a high note.
Pure defiance and indomitable. Fair play. Enjoyable read.
28th Feb 2023 2:01pm
Deep gratitude for your exquisitely profound comment. Much appreciated. Indeed you understood the nuances of my poem with finely applied intellect. I really do love being comprehended as you did for this poem. I am most grateful for the application of your clear aptitude to my verse.
John
John
9th Mar 2023 5:26am
9th Mar 2023 5:32am
Jennifer, thank you, I am most honored that you read it twice. That is a great compliment. to me as a writer.
John
John
