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I Hope You Don't Mind Me Joining You
After she began
soaking in the tub,
Lucy saw Jeff walk
in and let his robe
slide off before her.
soaking in the tub,
Lucy saw Jeff walk
in and let his robe
slide off before her.
Published 26th Feb 2023
Author's Note
The title of this harar poem happens to be what one half of a couple says to the other half who is soaking in the bathtub.
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27th Feb 2023 6:20am
Last line led my mind into composing this rhyme:
slide off before her,,
showing his scorer.
ready to advance
if she gave the chance.
slide off before her,,
showing his scorer.
ready to advance
if she gave the chance.
27th Feb 2023 12:05pm
