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Just fuck me...
Just fuck me
The body can't wait
Just fuck me
My opening drips lava lust
It's all you think about
You're nothing without my youth
This is your chance
Be rude
I want you to bite
Ransack my curves
Do my pert nipples excite you?
I cut glass with their sharpness
I don't need love
I need your violent sneer
Tempt me
Crave me
Rip my clothes to shreds
I'm nothing without your thrusts in my sex
You're a barbarian
Bruise me, colors not yet invented
Your slave, your need, my salvation
The body can't wait
Just fuck me
My opening drips lava lust
It's all you think about
You're nothing without my youth
This is your chance
Be rude
I want you to bite
Ransack my curves
Do my pert nipples excite you?
I cut glass with their sharpness
I don't need love
I need your violent sneer
Tempt me
Crave me
Rip my clothes to shreds
I'm nothing without your thrusts in my sex
You're a barbarian
Bruise me, colors not yet invented
Your slave, your need, my salvation
Author's Note
Inspired by many years of lust, longing, inspiration, and appreciation. ;)
Sorry I haven't been around... Have a lot going on. I know I have missed some really great writing. I hope to get some reading in soon.
Sorry I haven't been around... Have a lot going on. I know I have missed some really great writing. I hope to get some reading in soon.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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- Edited 26th Aug 2023 5:45pm
21st Feb 2023 7:39pm
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Re: Re. Just do me...
21st Feb 2023 7:59pm
Haha, it is much more fun when someone else is handling you. ;)
Everyone loves a beautiful pearl right? And a girl loves getting pearls too. Everyone wins!
OH FUCK YES, keep on screwing... That's what everyone wants right?
You do know how to make a girl laugh Rac. And that's a good thing if you ask me. ;)
Definitely the right circum... lol
So glad it was enjoyable, you know I can be very direct... But I don't think there is anything wrong with that. :p
Really love it when you get all tongue tied... (because it's so funny) Big smile for you... ;)
Everyone loves a beautiful pearl right? And a girl loves getting pearls too. Everyone wins!
OH FUCK YES, keep on screwing... That's what everyone wants right?
You do know how to make a girl laugh Rac. And that's a good thing if you ask me. ;)
Definitely the right circum... lol
So glad it was enjoyable, you know I can be very direct... But I don't think there is anything wrong with that. :p
Really love it when you get all tongue tied... (because it's so funny) Big smile for you... ;)
Re. Just fuck me...
21st Feb 2023 7:45pm
Nothing like saying it how it is. I appreciate a woman who admits that she just needs to be f’d (I only say fuck in my poems, lol).
Loving this!!
Loving this!!
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21st Feb 2023 8:04pm
Sometimes you just have to skip to small talk and get straight to the point so to speak. ;) Because we have a lot of needs damnit! And definitely go batshit crazy when not getting f'd. I find that so funny that you only say it in your poems. lol And I am so glad you are loving this, I totally knew you would get it Mary. * pun intended * ;)
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Ok, let me clear something up. I love saying fuck. It releases so many emotions in so many ways, especially pent up passion :) I was just trying to be a lady, lol. Now THAT is funny, don’t you think? Lol.
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21st Feb 2023 8:15pm
Fuck is such a versatile word, you just can't help but say it... ;) It's the one word that's truly universal, I think even extraterrestrials know it. But anyway, you are always a lady to me no matter how many times you fuck, I mean say fuck... you know what I mean damnit. lol But yes, that is kinda funny anyway. :p
Re. Just fuck me...
21st Feb 2023 7:51pm
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21st Feb 2023 8:08pm
Oh yeah, my filter is totally broken. I am reminded of that often. lol
But what's wrong with Direct, Savage, and Loud and Clear... I like that!
And I love red meat... throbbing and filled with blood. :p
But how many times have you called me a vampire now?
I won't deny it, I do love to suck... oral fixations and all... among other things.
Loving the BIG LIKE and I really appreciate the RL AWARD so much.
But what's wrong with Direct, Savage, and Loud and Clear... I like that!
And I love red meat... throbbing and filled with blood. :p
But how many times have you called me a vampire now?
I won't deny it, I do love to suck... oral fixations and all... among other things.
Loving the BIG LIKE and I really appreciate the RL AWARD so much.
Re: Re. Just fuck me...
21st Feb 2023 9:17pm
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21st Feb 2023 9:20pm
Thanks! It bugs me if I don't have the right picture. :p My OCD won't allow it damnit! That one did get me flagged EC though. lol
Re. Just fuck me...
21st Feb 2023 8:22pm
Feral, you belong in a cage protect us from ourselves. An exhibit at a dark carnival driving men mad, A doorway of hidden desires as we scream "this lust is not me" as we reach with both hands for more.
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21st Feb 2023 8:35pm
Haha, yes... I am sure there are many that would agree with you that I belong in a cage for your protection, or for mine. lol You made me think of one I wrote called Evil Concert, perhaps I will post that next time. But oh yeah I could definitely be an exhibit at a dark carnival to drive you mad. When you open that doorway of hidden desires it's impossible to go back. You will always be searching for more and needing more forever. Those sensations will definitely drive you mad...
Re. Just fuck me...
YOU WHAT?! Oh no, I wanna take it much slower than that. Art galleries, coffee mornings, shopping malls... I think you would have lost interest in me by then, lol. ;-)
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21st Feb 2023 8:49pm
Haha, yeah yeah... getting f'd at the art gallery and shopping mall sounds good to me. lol I do love art though and the UK has such incredible museums and galleries. It's incredible to see all the art from all over the world. And of course coffee in the morning always. Don't say that, that makes me feel bad damnit. lol So what kind of art do you like Billy?
Re: Re. Just fuck me...
21st Feb 2023 8:56pm
Maybe we could cut a deal here? Start with coffee in the morning, visit that damn art gallery, then go shopping. Perhaps I could watch you try on a few garments in the changing room booth & tell you if I like them or not, not that my opinion would matter, lol! I quite like abstract art. PoetSpeak & Crimsin's artwork are notable of praise on DUP in my opinion. ;-)
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21st Feb 2023 9:18pm
Well that's a good order to go in. And I love when someone tells me what clothes they like. ;) I totally agree, there are some great artists on here like PoetSpeak, Crimsin, NightGoddess, etc...
Re. Just fuck me...
21st Feb 2023 8:46pm
Re: Re. Just fuck me...
21st Feb 2023 9:08pm
Well that definitely says a lot if you ask me Jazz! Sometimes it's just best to come out and say what you need and want. ;) Although getting there is part of the fun too. Maybe listening to some Jazz. Really appreciate you stopping by and sharing your thoughts with me always.
Re. Just fuck me...
21st Feb 2023 8:56pm
Well sweetie that was well worth the wait
You are back with a BANG literally
Awesome erotic read
Love and light
Ron xx
You are back with a BANG literally
Awesome erotic read
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. Just fuck me...
21st Feb 2023 9:27pm
Really glad you felt it was worth the wait Ron! That means a lot to me. I always love a good BANG. ;) And you know I always want to give an awesome erotic read. Just expressing some of my intense needs. :p As always, sending so much love and light back at ya. :)
Re. Just fuck me...
21st Feb 2023 9:48pm
what an invitation! You must have them lining up around the block...as always an exciting and stimulating read...L
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22nd Feb 2023 1:33pm
Yeah, maybe I didn't think that one out well enough. lol But that's my lack of filter showing through. :p I am here to excite and stimulate you so that makes me happy. ;) It's great to see you BC.
Re. Just fuck me...
21st Feb 2023 10:32pm
Mis KristinaX you need to enjoy orgasmic all day and night long. Keep on writing you beautiful sexy woman.
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22nd Feb 2023 1:35pm
Oh yeah! I LOVE orgasmic bliss all day and night long but I do have so many other things I have to get done. :p I hope you are enjoying orgasmic bliss Francisco. ;) And I love it when you say beautiful sexy woman, but who wouldn't? (well women I mean lol)
Re: Re. Just fuck me...
22nd Feb 2023 1:36pm
You sly dog you... Putting me on the spot with that question. :p I might have to come back to this one. Possibly a pun in there too. lol
Re. Just fuck me...
22nd Feb 2023 00:41am
So, what exactly are you trying to say..? I'm not sure I got it, you might need to spell it out for me.... 😉😁
Just kidding... it's loud & clear! Way to capture the moment. 👍 Raw & juicy.
❤️k
Just kidding... it's loud & clear! Way to capture the moment. 👍 Raw & juicy.
❤️k
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Re: Re. Just fuck me...
22nd Feb 2023 1:36pm
Haha, yeah you know exactly what I am saying BT. lol We always need to capture the moment. Raw and juicy is the best... Just go for it... and get those needs met. ;)
Re. Just fuck me...
Anonymous
22nd Feb 2023 2:52am
Awwww
My my
Just fuck me man!!!
I wanna hard rough Fuck... Aaaah...
It's awesome sensual fantastic erotic piece...
My my
Just fuck me man!!!
I wanna hard rough Fuck... Aaaah...
It's awesome sensual fantastic erotic piece...
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Re: Re. Just fuck me...
22nd Feb 2023 1:38pm
Someone would be very lucky to fuck you olivia. ;) A hard rough fuck definitely has my mind thinking of so many things. Aaaah indeed. Really happy you found it an awesome sensual fantastic erotic piece. I love that!
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Anonymous
22nd Feb 2023 1:54pm
awwww darling.. my lonely p**sy is waiting for hot tall young man... for his thickness n for his hotness ha ha
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Re. Just fuck me...
22nd Feb 2023 3:41am
As the T-shirt said, "Fuck you, you fucking fuck" or something like that... So many meanings, so little time
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Re: Re. Just fuck me...
22nd Feb 2023 1:38pm
Oh boy! That's quite the T-shirt, I haven't seen that one but I like it. So many meanings indeed, and always so little time... Time is passing faster and faster it seems. ugh!
Re: Re. Just fuck me...
22nd Feb 2023 3:40pm
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23rd Feb 2023 10:11pm
So true, if there is anything worth taking your time on then you have my vote on those for sure...
Re. Just fuck me...
22nd Feb 2023 4:34am
Speechless haha. Makes me feel better though 😉
https://youtu.be/Du9eIXI6bAs
https://youtu.be/Du9eIXI6bAs
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Re: Re. Just fuck me...
22nd Feb 2023 1:39pm
Well I like leaving you speechless DC. And especially making you feel better. Ah yes! so many positions indeed. And "nothing that I wouldn't do" ;) Great song, much better than the original.
Re. Just fuck me...
22nd Feb 2023 6:36am
Favourite lines:
Do my pert nipples excite you?
I cut glass with their sharpness
Do my pert nipples excite you?
I cut glass with their sharpness
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Re: Re. Just fuck me...
22nd Feb 2023 1:39pm
Hey SS, it's great to see you! ;) You know when excited it definitely causes them to be even more pert. It's another way for the body to say I really need it now. ;)
Re: Re. Just fuck me...
The hyperbole of the second line quoted gives makes it a turn on to me!
I could sum up the poem as FMV (Fuck-Me Verse, cf FMBs - Fuck-Me Boots).
I could sum up the poem as FMV (Fuck-Me Verse, cf FMBs - Fuck-Me Boots).
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Re: Re. Just fuck me...
23rd Feb 2023 10:15pm
Oh yes! the second line is so true. ;) I like how you sum it up, especially Fuck-Me Boots. :p
Re. Just fuck me...
22nd Feb 2023 2:10pm
Identify with the look on her face.
Kinetic frenzied fucking
The way I like it
Say it LOUD
JUST FUCK ME
Great write
Kinetic frenzied fucking
The way I like it
Say it LOUD
JUST FUCK ME
Great write
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22nd Feb 2023 2:43pm
That look says it all doesn't it. ;) I really love that look because you can see the intense pleasure totally overtaking her from that kinetic frenzied fucking. Definitely the way I like it. :p Will definitely say it loud... I have needs damnit! Love that you think it's a great write.
Re. Just fuck me...
23rd Feb 2023 00:07am
Ransacked.
All the trappings torn off the walls.
Totally distracted.
Completely diverted.
Thoroughly.
All the trappings torn off the walls.
Totally distracted.
Completely diverted.
Thoroughly.
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Re: Re. Just fuck me...
23rd Feb 2023 10:10pm
Oh yes! ranscacked for sure... ;)
Clawing at the walls while....
Definitely being distracted.
Completely taken.
Thoroughly inside and out.
Sexy comment there RT. ;) Love it!
Clawing at the walls while....
Definitely being distracted.
Completely taken.
Thoroughly inside and out.
Sexy comment there RT. ;) Love it!
Re. Just fuck me...
23rd Feb 2023 6:05pm
This poem makes me feel things, a rare occurrence. Thank you, and well done.
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Re: Re. Just fuck me...
23rd Feb 2023 10:19pm
I am here to make you feel things Sugar-Britches because it's very important to feel so I hope you will continue to feel some more. ;) And thank you so much for stopping by and sharing your thoughts with me. Also, a very warm welcome to the Underground too.
Re. Just fuck me...
23rd Feb 2023 9:15pm
Wow, that was intense Kristina. I loved your note, by years of longing?
I think it goes without saying your unfiltered, uncensored and raw spills are powerful and intriguing. You capture all of your readers imaginations (and fantasies).
Amazing work.
I think it goes without saying your unfiltered, uncensored and raw spills are powerful and intriguing. You capture all of your readers imaginations (and fantasies).
Amazing work.
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Re: Re. Just fuck me...
23rd Feb 2023 10:26pm
You know how much I love a Wow. Ah, that's a long subject... I have so many years of longing to account for. ;) Always intense and always gets even more so. My filter is definitely broken but that's another subject that sometimes gets me in trouble damnit. lol But I love that you like my raw spills. And I adore capturing the imagination and fantasies too. I suppose the pic helps a bit too in regards to the right mindset! :p
Re. Just fuck me...
24th Feb 2023 1:31am
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24th Feb 2023 12:37pm
Oh yeah! sometimes you just have to jump right in there and get your needs met. ;) I am glad you could feel what I am talking about and love it Tootie... A very warm welcome to the underground and thanks for stopping by and sharing your thoughts with me.
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24th Feb 2023 8:46pm
Well hey there 13, I love the number 13 and that's quite a name too. :) I am really happy you liked the imagery. I think the picture matched pretty well to help with that also. ;) Thanks so much for stopping by and sharing your thoughts with me.
Re: Re. Just fuck me...
29th Apr 2023 8:48pm
Ahh, I don't think I bothered with the picture. Great job!
Thanks, my account is really old so under the rules back then I was allowed to keep this username.
Have a good one!
Thanks, my account is really old so under the rules back then I was allowed to keep this username.
Have a good one!
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30th Apr 2023 1:38am
2011... ah you have been around a long time on here! Well I like that you didn't bother with the picture, it means the words were more meaningful then. I hope you are having a great weekend 13... :)
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14th Jan 2024 3:16am
Well yeah, you're doing a pretty good job with your words.
Sorry for the late reply but I suppose I had a good weekend. haha
Sorry for the late reply but I suppose I had a good weekend. haha
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1st Mar 2023 9:10pm
👏 👏 👏 absolutely passionate and deeply felted amazing 👏 ❤ please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖 I love this ink spill bdsm is one of my hidden fetiishs incredible ❤ 😉
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3rd Mar 2023 12:55pm
That's me, passionate and deeply felt. ;) I know I haven't been around much lately but I will try to keep writing for you REMARKABLE. How could I not? ;) And BDSM, oh yeah, that's definitely one of my fetishes as well. I love to lose control and be dominated completely, to feel everything so deeply and satisfy the deepest darkest fantasies...
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3rd Mar 2023 8:20pm
Ok 👌 copy Kristina I appreciate 🙏 you and all your musing!! Ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖 keep on writing ✍ ok
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Anonymous
6th Mar 2023 10:55pm
Errrr…okay! If you want me to! 😉 Love it. 😊
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Re: Re. Just fuck me...
6th Mar 2023 11:37pm
Haha... So easy! ;) Well, a good long F is the best thing for stress, anxiety, and all the difficulties of life; at least for me. It's great to see you PQ... Where have you been? :p And I am so glad you love it!!! Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts with me. ;)
Re. Just fuck me...
9th Mar 2023 6:58am
As a guy who's almost perpetually horny I enjoyed your frankness. Great poem.
Mundus
Mundus
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9th Mar 2023 2:12pm
As a girl who is perpetually horny sometimes you have to be direct about your needs right? ;) I love that you found it a great poem. Stay awesome and horny... Having a healthy sex drive is a reflection on your health after all. Thanks so much for stopping by and sharing your thoughts with me Mundus...
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9th Mar 2023 2:28pm
I agree wholeheartedly. I guess the problems arise when you express your needs and wants in unhealthy ways but that's not the case. And that's true, sometimes clear and to the point is better! Thanks again for sharing.
Mundus
Mundus
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Re. Just fuck me...
19th Mar 2023 4:20pm
You're a barbarian
Bruise me, colors not yet invented
Your slave, your need, my salvation
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Ciào comes from the Venetian dialect,
where the phrase s-ciào vostro meant “I am your slave
and over the years
has become shortened to just Ciào
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20th Mar 2023 6:16pm
Haha, yes I can be rough. ;)
"Bruise me, colors not yet invented" oh yes! an infinite array of colors that go on forever and ever.
Such intense needs... always needing salvation from them.
I did not know that about Ciao and I love learning new things. To say "I am yours" is a powerful thing... and to be that is even more powerful. ;)
"Bruise me, colors not yet invented" oh yes! an infinite array of colors that go on forever and ever.
Such intense needs... always needing salvation from them.
I did not know that about Ciao and I love learning new things. To say "I am yours" is a powerful thing... and to be that is even more powerful. ;)
Re. Just fuck me...
26th Mar 2023 3:30pm
What's amazing about these verses is that they grow heavenly provocative.
It's like a female angel speaking in sensual whispers.
It's like a female angel speaking in sensual whispers.
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Re: Re. Just fuck me...
26th Mar 2023 11:59pm
Well I absolutely adore being heavenly provocative. ;) And to be a female angel speaking in sensual whispers, now that's something beautiful isn't it... perhaps a Fallen angel full of every desire imaginable and far too naughty for heaven. ;)
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29th Mar 2023 3:22pm
Re. Just fuck me...
20th Jun 2023 6:43pm
You perfectly described what it's like to date a Werewolf. Damn! I'm gonna have a cold shower, it's getting hot under all this fur. 😘🐺🎩xxx
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20th Jun 2023 6:58pm
Mmm a werewolf... yes... I love the savagery of being dominated completely. That beast with an insatiable desire to consume every inch... That transformation into something that cannot be contained. I love that feeling of total surrender and submission. Feeling the claws raking into the flesh where pain becomes pleasure and desire. Howling in a total body orgasm that consumes every part of you. Oh yes... Supernatural... that's the best feeling in the world.
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20th Jun 2023 7:27pm
Holy fuck! I'm off back in the shower.
Fuck it! Fill the tub with ice. 😬
Iv always been drawn to Werewolf chick's instead of Vampires. Ok they suck n swallow, but I prefer to let rip and leave the FBI with plenty of overtime.
Woof baby, woof! 😘 xxx
Fuck it! Fill the tub with ice. 😬
Iv always been drawn to Werewolf chick's instead of Vampires. Ok they suck n swallow, but I prefer to let rip and leave the FBI with plenty of overtime.
Woof baby, woof! 😘 xxx
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21st Jun 2023 9:38pm
I love a good shower...
and a HOT bath even more... very HOT! ;)
Ah, I love them both but I must admit a sweet spot for Vampires and sucking... (and blood) but yes being ripped apart and dominated in every way is absolutely incredible. I do love doggy style. :p
and a HOT bath even more... very HOT! ;)
Ah, I love them both but I must admit a sweet spot for Vampires and sucking... (and blood) but yes being ripped apart and dominated in every way is absolutely incredible. I do love doggy style. :p
Re. Just fuck me...
4th Sep 2024 12:47pm