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Private Universe

what I love about you
is the ship's adventure
which goes to the pole.
 
what I love about you
is the audacity to participate
of the great discoveries.
 
what I love about you
are the faraway things.
I love the impossible.
 
I enter your eyes
like in a grove
full of sun...
and sweaty, hungry, furious
I have the passion
of a hunter
for wanting your flesh.
 
what I love about you
is the impossible
with no despair...
 
what I love about you
it's an autumn saturday
and the stolen kiss
of my distraction.
 
the change you make
In my monotonous tone
with colors of joy.
 
what I love about you
it's a bigger gem
than any gold mine
on any map
of the desert I inhabit.
 
I love about you
is rhyme and verse
that bind your arms
to my universe.
 
I love about you
the silent moment
when I stop breathing
waiting for your mouth.
 
 
 
PAR
Written by PAR (PAULO ACACIO RAMOS)
Published
Author's Note
Using the inspiration of the following quote:

“I think of lovers as trees, growing to and from one another, searching for the same light.” — The Unbearable Weight of Staying by Warsan Shire
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