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Lava
You entered my life without an invitation.
Without a warning in the world of how your impact was to be.
Like a meteorite from outer-space crashed into what was just an acutely routine patch of my earth.
Now you are like lava, glowing & pouring into my once empty hole.
Without a warning in the world of how your impact was to be.
Like a meteorite from outer-space crashed into what was just an acutely routine patch of my earth.
Now you are like lava, glowing & pouring into my once empty hole.
Published 7th Feb 2023
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7th Feb 2023 10:49am
7th Feb 2023 10:51am
7th Feb 2023 1:28pm
Dear D,
Powerful and descriptive piece. Your write is full of imagery with a terrific closing line. Welcome to DU. H🌷
Powerful and descriptive piece. Your write is full of imagery with a terrific closing line. Welcome to DU. H🌷
7th Feb 2023 3:43pm
7th Feb 2023 7:25pm
8th Feb 2023 9:58am
I constantly look for words to describe the voids life leaves us with. Thank you for reading my poem.
18th Mar 2023 3:42pm
18th Mar 2023 9:16pm
21st Mar 2024 12:27pm
Empty hole sounds like something else!!. I do remember you said you describe that with the word pedals. Great poem and wonderful description.
21st Mar 2024 12:42pm
You are funny with the word hole.
Thank you soooo much for reading all these poems.
Thank you soooo much for reading all these poems.
