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We can go through cancer, my dear!
Don't give up, my dear sunshine;
your pain is like a knife to me,
your weary face expecting times,
when healthy you will be.
You are a hero on a quest
to regain your cozy smile,
and may your eyes find rest
but because they are alive;
beyond the lengthy struggle,
when each second is eternal,
hopeful trouble; gently huggle
me, in my love maternal.
Love that won't give up;
for we will find the root...
when the horror stops
you'll win a fresh route...
Each illness is a deviation
of mentality that needs reboot.
So we'll get over it, patient.
Your blush forever soothes.
We are helping each other now
to put this opportunity to use;
for I believe the illness' dawn
will make you blossom in truce.
We will activate the light
of your blueprint acquired.
And then your heroic fight
that has made you tired
will lead to a brand new You
with a saintly life mission...
And you're a person who
can do it, for you listen;
you gentle and politest man,
your bravery is unbroken;
and you will be the One
whose heart will reopen..
I am standing by your side,
until your cancer is transmuted...
Despair is not God's, our guide...
For you will be boosted.
Day after day and step by step,
transforming blessings in disguise...
And slowly, we're away from death.
I can't wait. For you'll be wise.
The Father teaches us to pray,
to focus on the humble spirit,
to get back to the righteous way...
and then your trial will be lifted.
St. Gabriel activates records
when one purely opens to God,
when seeing one's sincere efforts
to follow the path of the Lord.
So hold on a while longer, dear...
Heaven's council will notice, I know.
For your adamantine future is near.
Just hang on a bit. You can do it ... wow!
your pain is like a knife to me,
your weary face expecting times,
when healthy you will be.
You are a hero on a quest
to regain your cozy smile,
and may your eyes find rest
but because they are alive;
beyond the lengthy struggle,
when each second is eternal,
hopeful trouble; gently huggle
me, in my love maternal.
Love that won't give up;
for we will find the root...
when the horror stops
you'll win a fresh route...
Each illness is a deviation
of mentality that needs reboot.
So we'll get over it, patient.
Your blush forever soothes.
We are helping each other now
to put this opportunity to use;
for I believe the illness' dawn
will make you blossom in truce.
We will activate the light
of your blueprint acquired.
And then your heroic fight
that has made you tired
will lead to a brand new You
with a saintly life mission...
And you're a person who
can do it, for you listen;
you gentle and politest man,
your bravery is unbroken;
and you will be the One
whose heart will reopen..
I am standing by your side,
until your cancer is transmuted...
Despair is not God's, our guide...
For you will be boosted.
Day after day and step by step,
transforming blessings in disguise...
And slowly, we're away from death.
I can't wait. For you'll be wise.
The Father teaches us to pray,
to focus on the humble spirit,
to get back to the righteous way...
and then your trial will be lifted.
St. Gabriel activates records
when one purely opens to God,
when seeing one's sincere efforts
to follow the path of the Lord.
So hold on a while longer, dear...
Heaven's council will notice, I know.
For your adamantine future is near.
Just hang on a bit. You can do it ... wow!
Published 5th Feb 2023
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14th Mar 2023 7:32am
I have to admit the unpredictable rhyme scheme generated my desire to read on. I saw ABAC then ABCB, then rhyming. For what you were conveying it worked well.
14th Mar 2023 9:29am
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15th Apr 2023 7:30am
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21st May 2023 5:17pm
I don't have the time, Joseph! I am praying for my sick beloved one day and night now. I just can't feel like doing anything else now.!!
21st May 2023 7:32pm
22nd May 2023 7:39am
I have faith and know God's plan is the best for him!
I haven't lost the joy in life and hope is guiding me.
Constant prayer is definitely the best step but it takes a lot of time so everything else in my life seems to be a bit on hold for now!
I haven't lost the joy in life and hope is guiding me.
Constant prayer is definitely the best step but it takes a lot of time so everything else in my life seems to be a bit on hold for now!
22nd May 2023 8:48am
Dear Boyana,
I admire your faith in Jesus Christ. Christ be with you, and your boyfriend, cure him, and give you health.
I admire your faith in Jesus Christ. Christ be with you, and your boyfriend, cure him, and give you health.
22nd May 2023 11:27am
Dear Boyana,
I am so eager to know if my poetry has any effects to show just a little bit of the unlimited and insurmountable greatness of our Lord, Jesus Christ. I find myself too weak to show just a little bit of the Lord's perfection, and His sublime and immeasurable effects on our hearts and lives. Nobody tells me anything about this point. I wonder why. I 've heard it just from you. Thank you very much. J.Z.
I am so eager to know if my poetry has any effects to show just a little bit of the unlimited and insurmountable greatness of our Lord, Jesus Christ. I find myself too weak to show just a little bit of the Lord's perfection, and His sublime and immeasurable effects on our hearts and lives. Nobody tells me anything about this point. I wonder why. I 've heard it just from you. Thank you very much. J.Z.
22nd May 2023 3:03pm
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20th Jun 2023 6:16am
Anonymous
22nd Jun 2023 7:50am
amazing poem
wish you health and peace
good job
thanks for sharing
MANT
wish you health and peace
good job
thanks for sharing
MANT
22nd Jun 2023 8:52am
5th Jul 2023 8:44am
The poem exudes optimism, emphasizing the power of resilience, faith, and the transformative journey towards healing. Your use of imagery and metaphors adds depth and evokes a sense of hope and determination. Bless!
5th Jul 2023 8:49am
Thank you!! So far the approach has positive results!!!! :))) much appreciated!
Anonymous
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12th Jul 2023 7:56pm
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12th Jul 2023 8:50pm
Thank you ! Much appreciated! I definitely have faith he will be well!
1st Aug 2023 6:28am
1st Aug 2023 9:04am
19th Oct 2023 8:44am
Sorry, whit I read is you lost someone dear to that dreadful disease as I did my mother
Cancer is not easy to take asI know personal been there
well woven
Cancer is not easy to take asI know personal been there
well woven
19th Oct 2023 10:37am
I know... It is really difficult to go through this constant lingering faith that they'll live, but at the same time seeing how they weaken...! Thank you and my condolences for your mother!
19th Oct 2023 3:35pm
