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My Vindication
I breathe in your love
it runs through my heart
we wake up high
as high as the sky
to touch on your flesh
is to touch every fantasy
hopeless romantic
singing songs
making you smile
there’s nothing better
nothing last forever
but I don’t need to know the end
no other like you in the world
so damn true
never disappointing
when we spend all day
enjoying each other
I know I hit the jackpot
dodged a few bullets
maybe one hit
arriving at heavens gate
coming home late
a bit fazed
never did you question me
always trusting my loyalty
so I do the same for you
I still get chills
how you kiss me
they don’t get it
your wild side
like they don’t get mine
so we keep it to ourselves
keep it where it counts
all the wrong they say I am
things I don't quite live up to
when you lay in my arms
it vindicates me
shows me
i’m on the right path
it runs through my heart
we wake up high
as high as the sky
to touch on your flesh
is to touch every fantasy
hopeless romantic
singing songs
making you smile
there’s nothing better
nothing last forever
but I don’t need to know the end
no other like you in the world
so damn true
never disappointing
when we spend all day
enjoying each other
I know I hit the jackpot
dodged a few bullets
maybe one hit
arriving at heavens gate
coming home late
a bit fazed
never did you question me
always trusting my loyalty
so I do the same for you
I still get chills
how you kiss me
they don’t get it
your wild side
like they don’t get mine
so we keep it to ourselves
keep it where it counts
all the wrong they say I am
things I don't quite live up to
when you lay in my arms
it vindicates me
shows me
i’m on the right path
Published 18th Jan 2023
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A older poem of mine that was on my LK account.
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18th Jan 2023 12:20pm
21st Jan 2023 2:39am
Glad you enjoyed my poem 😁
Thank you for the read. It's very much appreciated.
Thank you for the read. It's very much appreciated.
Anonymous
18th Jan 2023 12:21pm
Beautiful tribute my friend ❣️
21st Jan 2023 2:45am
Always have to praise the one that keeps me going.
Thank you for the read. I very much appreciate it 😁
Thank you for the read. I very much appreciate it 😁
18th Jan 2023 2:17pm
Keeping your wild side quiet, where it counts. I love that. Makes me think of a whole bunch of scenarios. A great way to start the day indeed!
Love this write.
Love this write.
21st Jan 2023 2:58am
Got to keep it wild hehe.
Glad you enjoyed my poem. It is very much appreciated 😁
Glad you enjoyed my poem. It is very much appreciated 😁
18th Jan 2023 4:40pm
That picture is captivating me. The darkness framing the beautiful eyes dreaming,
peering through the night. So ready for something to pull you in. The contemplation.
To breathe in love as it runs through you making you high.
That's when touch transforms into an exploration of every fantasy.
Hopeless romantics are so alluring, so enticing, so beautiful.
That's when you sing songs, and the smile just comes naturally.
And perhaps it will last forever and the end never comes.
But you certainly will. ;) Always wanting to spend every day together.
Enjoying each other is the best. Dodged a few bullets myself.
Trust is so vital to a relationship and you know when you have it.
Jealousy and possessiveness only destroy the love and trust.
When you still get chills how she kisses you, you know... it's perfect.
So often someone is condemned for the wild side, but that's what they want.
Definitely keep it where it counts, never-ending torrent of passion and lust.
When you have that love, it truly does vindicate you from the criticism.
You are definitely on the right path, this is so beautiful. I love it!
peering through the night. So ready for something to pull you in. The contemplation.
To breathe in love as it runs through you making you high.
That's when touch transforms into an exploration of every fantasy.
Hopeless romantics are so alluring, so enticing, so beautiful.
That's when you sing songs, and the smile just comes naturally.
And perhaps it will last forever and the end never comes.
But you certainly will. ;) Always wanting to spend every day together.
Enjoying each other is the best. Dodged a few bullets myself.
Trust is so vital to a relationship and you know when you have it.
Jealousy and possessiveness only destroy the love and trust.
When you still get chills how she kisses you, you know... it's perfect.
So often someone is condemned for the wild side, but that's what they want.
Definitely keep it where it counts, never-ending torrent of passion and lust.
When you have that love, it truly does vindicate you from the criticism.
You are definitely on the right path, this is so beautiful. I love it!
21st Jan 2023 4:35am
Yeah, those bullets could of been killer haha. Never ending passion and love. What more can anyone ask for?
Thanks for the read, friend. It is very much appreciated 😁
Thanks for the read, friend. It is very much appreciated 😁
19th Jan 2023 2:23am
21st Jan 2023 6:59am
I'm glad you think so 😁
Thank you very much for the read. It is very much appreciated.
Thank you very much for the read. It is very much appreciated.
19th Jan 2023 10:14am
21st Jan 2023 9:28am
19th Jan 2023 12:21pm
YES, you hit all the sweet spots of a relationship like you have.
I'm lucky, I have it too.
BIG LIKE
RL AWARD
I'm lucky, I have it too.
BIG LIKE
RL AWARD
21st Jan 2023 9:30am
Makes life worth something. Otherwise not sure what I would have to hold on to.
Thanks for the read. It is very much appreciated 😁
Thanks for the read. It is very much appreciated 😁
19th Jan 2023 9:12pm
Ah, lovely, heartfelt, romantic... and I love the secret wild sides too. 😉Wonderful write.
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21st Jan 2023 9:38am
All the best parts of a relationship.
Thank you for the read. I very much appreciated 😁
Thank you for the read. I very much appreciated 😁
