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Watching you fall
Watching you fall
It’s more than enough
To never be you
And never enough to feel what I need.
Hearing and knowing it’s nothing but you slowly killing yourself,
Is more than enough
To never be you.
But never enough to understand why.
Knowing will always be enough.
But it will never ever be enough.
It’s more than enough
To never be you
And never enough to feel what I need.
Hearing and knowing it’s nothing but you slowly killing yourself,
Is more than enough
To never be you.
But never enough to understand why.
Knowing will always be enough.
But it will never ever be enough.
Published 16th Jan 2023
Author's Note
I’ve been watching a family member struggle with addiction for a long time and this is a small insight into how I feel on the matter.
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16th Jan 2023 10:05pm
16th Jan 2023 10:12pm
I can understand from where I am about how powerless we are when a loved one is succumbing to drug abuse, illness, it is a terrible thing, exhausting and probably for many, a long and slow decline. Thank you for sharing this with us.
17th Jan 2023 12:03pm
Dear D,
It’s like a carousel no one exits. The dizzying exhaustion and frustration is so difficult. I copycat the rest of my response to the above comments. Anything else I’d say would be an inadequate duplication as they said it better.
H🌷
It’s like a carousel no one exits. The dizzying exhaustion and frustration is so difficult. I copycat the rest of my response to the above comments. Anything else I’d say would be an inadequate duplication as they said it better.
H🌷
18th Jan 2023 1:40pm
Great write. I like how you can express that there's only so much that you can do, but it feels like it's not enough even though it just might be. Good job.
24th Jan 2023 11:23pm
Very painful to read this. You are trying hard to find your own positives, emotionally.
