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Dying
the light awakens........
the soul
for I am dying
….maybe not in the literal sense
but then again
maybe I am
the universe in it's anonymity
opens it's doors,
heeding the call......we all must go
my days grow shorter
and I grow less and less afraid
in the fleeting moments
of this life and time we share
Inhibitions tend to whisk themselves away......
…...and in the waning hours
I need to find the strength
to say to you what
I want to say,
What you really need to know
(and that is)
How much I love you
How much I cherish you,
more than just my friend
fearing
that speaking the words
may somehow change the way you feel for me
and the moments
will dissipate like the "dust in the wind"
when I'm with you
I have felt those tinges
I have seen those color of love splashes
I've heard you in those moments
your heart quietly spoke to mine
but I was sorely afraid
that “Revelation 9:27-30”
would cause you to run away
(…..sometimes life and love can be so unkind)
that soft and gentle side of you
most will never hear
(yet I have)
the lyrics, your melody
have caressed my mind
and soul
(how I wished the whole world could know)
as the shades of day
grow more sullen and gray
I'm less afraid of feeling remorse
feeling regret
for not asking, not sharing
to you, what my heart needs to say
you are so beautiful,
my heart slowing
my pulse fading away.....
my last words to you, "Leopold"
…....”i love you”
(....is what I want to say)
Published 16th Jan 2023
Author's Note
.....when all the dots don't align and logic becomes quite illogical. In that, it won't stop love. #sometimeslovehasnorhymenoreason
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16th Jan 2023 5:33pm
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16th Jan 2023 5:50pm
.....the truth in natures waters fill this piece. Thank you for feeling me Crim
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Truly an awesome write you have done here. It says what so many wish to say at times. Yet you've done so, and quite eloquently.
I admire the genuine kindness and how tender you "spoke" the message. Who wouldn't want to receive such a message from someone. You've written out a guide for many to follow, when they attempt such an undertaking.
So well done.
I admire the genuine kindness and how tender you "spoke" the message. Who wouldn't want to receive such a message from someone. You've written out a guide for many to follow, when they attempt such an undertaking.
So well done.
