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The First Hex
While we're entwined
Ideas, secrets and minds
Wicked aligned
Reckless abandon, I'll show you mine:
Across the world
Summoned hurt to crawl, unfurl
It's teeth whirled
Reached through gladly, it ate a girl
Runes wrote in blood
Fool didn't care if he should
Deep in the mud
Dark deeds done in the vain of love
Was there a toll?
Mistakes he should have foretold
It claimed a soul
Across the world, the young for old.
Ideas, secrets and minds
Wicked aligned
Reckless abandon, I'll show you mine:
Across the world
Summoned hurt to crawl, unfurl
It's teeth whirled
Reached through gladly, it ate a girl
Runes wrote in blood
Fool didn't care if he should
Deep in the mud
Dark deeds done in the vain of love
Was there a toll?
Mistakes he should have foretold
It claimed a soul
Across the world, the young for old.
Published 16th Jan 2023
| Edited 17th Jan 2023
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18th Jan 2023 10:12pm
Ah, what a masterfully crafted hex it is.
I felt entwined.
So many ideas, secrets, and two minds.
Wicked aligned is the best. Reckless abandon.
Showing each other things... ;)
"It's white teeth whirled,
Reached through gladly, it ate a girl."
I love that expression...
There is just something about eating a girl. ;)
Runes written in blood, playing with Trouble there.
Dark deeds often people don't care.
And a morale to the story...
There is always a toll.
Across the world, the young for old.
Made me think of he lost his soul and body.
In exchange for these evil deeds.
A pretty steep price indeed.
I felt entwined.
So many ideas, secrets, and two minds.
Wicked aligned is the best. Reckless abandon.
Showing each other things... ;)
"It's white teeth whirled,
Reached through gladly, it ate a girl."
I love that expression...
There is just something about eating a girl. ;)
Runes written in blood, playing with Trouble there.
Dark deeds often people don't care.
And a morale to the story...
There is always a toll.
Across the world, the young for old.
Made me think of he lost his soul and body.
In exchange for these evil deeds.
A pretty steep price indeed.
