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Our Deepest Wounds
Betrayal, a poison in the heart
A wound that cuts and tears apart
A word that carries such a weight
It breaks the trust, it seals the fate
It starts with whispers in the night
A seed of doubt, a sly delight
It grows with secrets, lies, and lies
Until the truth, it does arise
A wound that cuts and tears apart
A word that carries such a weight
It breaks the trust, it seals the fate
It starts with whispers in the night
A seed of doubt, a sly delight
It grows with secrets, lies, and lies
Until the truth, it does arise
Published 3rd Jan 2023
Author's Note
I am fine
It's just a poem that came to mind
No need to fret
Or get upset
It is just the way
That I portray
It's just a poem that came to mind
No need to fret
Or get upset
It is just the way
That I portray
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4th Jan 2023 2:37am
You're a very talented poet, CC. You evidently have an ease with words that bring to light everyday topics that anyone can relate to. Nicely done.
4th Jan 2023 3:12am
I am very flattered. I do try my best to write in a way that people can relate. Also, I find that poetry in and of itself can be relatable to everyone. There is not just one way to interpret a single poem, for each person can draw their own conclusion. That is the beauty of what we do.
You yourself are also very talented LC! Your poems always leave me with a tear in my eye. Even though I might not always comment, I definitely read them.
You yourself are also very talented LC! Your poems always leave me with a tear in my eye. Even though I might not always comment, I definitely read them.
5th Jan 2023 2:17am
