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my zen garden
I go to my happy place, I go to my garden to center myself
steam rises off the trees after it rains
they are alive and sigh relief
to be washed clean of smog they can now breathe
the weeds on the lawn are wild flowers to me
bloom where planted as Pastor Murray would say
that's what I believe, but I don't like this technological era
I think we're moving to fast you see
the winds tell me to let it all out on exhale
while chimes quietly tinkle in the background
and the song birds tell me it's a new day
the sun is shining and the morning dew reminds me we are brand new
the problems of the previous day wash down my back
not to forget the wisdom I've learned, but hold them dear
I know our creator is here
I see him in nature more so than any other place
because as ugly as this world can be
I am reminded of his grace
beautiful face of the Father reflected in the sun
I go to my happy place, yes I go to my garden
when I want to praise
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 29th Dec 2022
Author's Note
for ML"s the sounds of silence challenge
I don't believe in religion but I believe in our creator...
I don't believe in religion but I believe in our creator...
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Re. my zen garden
29th Dec 2022 6:18pm
beautiful Spiritual inspiration that vibrates my heart
you wrote well and rock the rhythm fabulous
you wrote well and rock the rhythm fabulous
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Re: Re. my zen garden
1st Jan 2023 11:28pm
Re. my zen garden
29th Dec 2022 6:39pm
Good stuff. i see myself slipping into forth or fifth place now............ 😉
Dan
Dan
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Re: Re. my zen garden
1st Jan 2023 11:29pm
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1st Jan 2023 11:29pm
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1st Jan 2023 11:30pm
Re. my zen garden
30th Dec 2022 11:14am
Dear B,
Amen. Loved the devotion and gratitude throughout the piece. I wish you all the best in the comp.
H🌷
Amen. Loved the devotion and gratitude throughout the piece. I wish you all the best in the comp.
H🌷
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Re: Re. my zen garden
1st Jan 2023 11:32pm
Re. my zen garden
30th Dec 2022 2:08pm
Your Zen is contagious
I remember well listening to wind chimes tinkling in the morning breeze at my grandmother's house and never wanting to move from that spot or time
Very very relaxing are your words, Crimsin
Thank You
I remember well listening to wind chimes tinkling in the morning breeze at my grandmother's house and never wanting to move from that spot or time
Very very relaxing are your words, Crimsin
Thank You
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Re: Re. my zen garden
1st Jan 2023 11:33pm
what a beautiful memory thank you for sharing it with me thank you my friend and Happy New Year 💕
Re. my zen garden
30th Dec 2022 4:38pm
I could feel the cool morning air as the trees breathe in the morning dew. You have such a gift for describing your natural surroundings. Beautifully done, Crimsin!
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1st Jan 2023 11:34pm
Re. my zen garden
30th Dec 2022 5:48pm
Gloriously expressive, abundant in gratitude.
Thank you for writing.
Happy New Year, dear Crimsin.
Thank you for writing.
Happy New Year, dear Crimsin.
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Re: Re. my zen garden
1st Jan 2023 11:34pm
hello beautiful Her sweet lady you're so kind to me thank you and Happy New Year 💕
Re. my zen garden
1st Jan 2023 00:35am
Beautiful, simply beautiful. That zen garden sounds like a bit of heaven on earth.
Good luck in the comp.
Good luck in the comp.
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Re: Re. my zen garden
1st Jan 2023 11:35pm
good afternoon dearest Wally thank you my friend it is heaven for me I'm am grateful 💕
Re. my zen garden
Anonymous
1st Jan 2023 9:33pm
*sigh*
I wish I had a beautiful Zen Garden like this.
The Creator is so good to us. ❤
I wish I had a beautiful Zen Garden like this.
The Creator is so good to us. ❤
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Re: Re. my zen garden
1st Jan 2023 11:37pm
he is good to us someday I will have to move from my home I don't own this land I am blessed to live on this last twenty years we always have the blue sky above 😊 thank you dearest poet for the love on this 💕
Re. my zen garden
18th May 2023 5:41am
As soon as I started reading I felt a sense of calm. I also liked the subtle shifts. At first I was thrown a little of balance when you said "bloom where planted as Pastor Murray would say
that's what I believe, but I don't like this technological era
I think we're moving to fast you see"
Then I went through and re-read it and the flow was back haha.
Though my belief system seems slightly different than yours, I totally understand how the call of nature can make us feel brand new, alive, rejuvenated. Especially in the early mornings. Well done on this write!💜
that's what I believe, but I don't like this technological era
I think we're moving to fast you see"
Then I went through and re-read it and the flow was back haha.
Though my belief system seems slightly different than yours, I totally understand how the call of nature can make us feel brand new, alive, rejuvenated. Especially in the early mornings. Well done on this write!💜
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