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A Confession
I have a confession to make.
I don't know whether you will empathise
or feel amused, or at all surprised.
I don't think I can write.
Every now and then,
by some absolute fluke,
the words line up in a pleasing way.
I appreciate the moment
because it always feels like
the Last Time.
For many years,
I've felt like any future ideas
will somehow just
drop out of my e
a
r
s
and the words will be no more.
I don't know whether you will empathise
or feel amused, or at all surprised.
I don't think I can write.
Every now and then,
by some absolute fluke,
the words line up in a pleasing way.
I appreciate the moment
because it always feels like
the Last Time.
For many years,
I've felt like any future ideas
will somehow just
drop out of my e
a
r
s
and the words will be no more.
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Re. A Confession
Anonymous
25th Dec 2022 11:00pm
Loved this so much. I've felt the same way.
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Re: Re. A Confession
Three years ago, I had maybe a dozen poems to my name - mainly all published, but no great interest or ability. Then someone challenged me to join in Escapril. I now have 200, but still don't think I have any ability and expect each one to be my last. I'd be semi-OK with it too... I'm a musician and composer really, and enjoy making all sorts of things, so creatively I'd survive!
Re. A Confession
25th Dec 2022 11:35pm
Re: Re. A Confession
25th Dec 2022 11:36pm
It's permanent for me. I don't think I'll ever stop, because I'm determined and bloody-minded. But if I couldn't write any more, I'd just do something else instead.
Anonymous
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26th Dec 2022 6:06am
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Re: Re. A Confession
26th Dec 2022 2:48pm
I'd be OK, as well. I'd compose, make the Christmas cards (I always do), and find other ways to express myself. I'm enjoying it while I can though.
Re. A Confession
26th Dec 2022 2:48pm
I am so very glad you took the leap and put words to page because I am all the richer having read you. Keep writing my friend because you are indeed a writer.
John
John
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Re: Re. A Confession
26th Dec 2022 2:51pm
Thank you! I'm a music teacher and composer really... but I also sometimes call myself a writer, fundraiser, mermaid, Energiser Bunny and Mad Hatter! I have been loving my journey through your vivid and evocative Americana.
Re. A Confession
26th Dec 2022 3:28pm
I like 👍 this one here!! Short and sweet 👌, straight to the point 👌 and very clear!! Great 👍 creativity 👏 please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ my friend peace ✌ and blessings always 🙏 ❤
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Re. A Confession
27th Dec 2022 11:58am
I'm not really a poet either but I write stuff.
It's in a poem format.
I think of it more as narrative writing.
I like to write and people seem to like it so I don't fight it.
Hope this helps ....
BIG LIKE
It's in a poem format.
I think of it more as narrative writing.
I like to write and people seem to like it so I don't fight it.
Hope this helps ....
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. A Confession
27th Dec 2022 11:59am
If it all dried up tomorrow, that would be fine. I'd do something else instead. Maybe I'll surprise myself again though.
Re: Re. A Confession
27th Dec 2022 12:00pm
Re: Re. A Confession
27th Dec 2022 12:04pm
Ha.
I have kids, I work, I do several major fundraisers each year. Creatively, I write, compose, master new instruments, make all my own cards, make bottle lamps, tie dye and decorate clothing. I'm studying Italian and Orchestration seriously, and spend the rest of my time on reading and word games.
I have kids, I work, I do several major fundraisers each year. Creatively, I write, compose, master new instruments, make all my own cards, make bottle lamps, tie dye and decorate clothing. I'm studying Italian and Orchestration seriously, and spend the rest of my time on reading and word games.
Re: Re. A Confession
27th Dec 2022 12:09pm
I do stuff too
But it doesn't mean you have to stop anything.
I write if it hits me.
I never look for it.
But it doesn't mean you have to stop anything.
I write if it hits me.
I never look for it.
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27th Dec 2022 12:10pm
Re. A Confession
27th Dec 2022 2:06pm
To me, this almost sounds like a New Year's resolution, god knows why but anyway, I now prefer the build up to it & all the hope a new year can bring. No, I haven't been drinking but it won't be long, lol! I even jot down one line sentences when ideas pop into my head. When I get enough of them, I may compile it into a poem called, 'Billy Snagg's Snaglets'. Like it?
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Re: Re. A Confession
27th Dec 2022 2:08pm
Oh yes, we need the Snaglets. Maybe a chapter or book of them, in the style of Proverbs. The Gospel According to Billy? I know where that belongs... in my Bonkers competition, that's where.
I'm not making any New Year's Resolutions! The one thing I REALLY need to do is sort out my health and fitness, which has taken a right battering. I haven't exercised for a month and have a 2.5k Swimathon in May. Aargh!
I'm not making any New Year's Resolutions! The one thing I REALLY need to do is sort out my health and fitness, which has taken a right battering. I haven't exercised for a month and have a 2.5k Swimathon in May. Aargh!
Re: Re. A Confession
27th Dec 2022 2:55pm
I think you will always have material to offer because of your varied lifestyle. In some ways you are quite lucky that way, in that writing opportunities are more likely. 😊
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Re. A Confession
27th Dec 2022 5:23pm
Yes, I can relate!
My brain immediately rearranged the letters to say the ideas will "drop out of my arse". Not sure what that says about me. 😆
❤️k
My brain immediately rearranged the letters to say the ideas will "drop out of my arse". Not sure what that says about me. 😆
❤️k
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27th Dec 2022 5:40pm
Re. A Confession
28th Dec 2022 5:53am
'' Every now and then,
by some absolute fluke,
the words line up in a pleasing way. ''
Haaa.. a quintessential poet you are...
by some absolute fluke,
the words line up in a pleasing way. ''
Haaa.. a quintessential poet you are...
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Re. A Confession
29th Dec 2022 10:04pm
I think this speaks to artistic integrity...
You seem like someone with integrity in all fields of their existence E$(=E Money)
(Hope you like your nickname
because their aint no changin...
JK... I could come up with something better but I like E Money..
That is what I would call you naturally...)
So...
What I was going to say is...
Your attributes are unique
and must always be part of the discussion...
I was just thinking about that...
Nikkimoe...
Was pondering the idea of making money off art...
I have such contrasting views,
in this regard, as I am shore many of you do...
But yes...
Every hand must hold the pen...
Every pen must have integrity...
Everyone must be part of the discussion...
You seem like someone with integrity in all fields of their existence E$(=E Money)
(Hope you like your nickname
because their aint no changin...
JK... I could come up with something better but I like E Money..
That is what I would call you naturally...)
So...
What I was going to say is...
Your attributes are unique
and must always be part of the discussion...
I was just thinking about that...
Nikkimoe...
Was pondering the idea of making money off art...
I have such contrasting views,
in this regard, as I am shore many of you do...
But yes...
Every hand must hold the pen...
Every pen must have integrity...
Everyone must be part of the discussion...
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Re: Re. A Confession
29th Dec 2022 10:48pm
Zero interest in making money.
I always tell the truth and I always give 100% to everything I do. Integrity... I like that.
Love all your work.
Creativity has taken a brief hike. I'm very sick.
I always tell the truth and I always give 100% to everything I do. Integrity... I like that.
Love all your work.
Creativity has taken a brief hike. I'm very sick.