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Out of Sight, Out of Time
For all I think I've learned
of love
a forever unanswered question
remains
what does it means when it comes from you?
Those words that once flowed easily
from your lips
now dammed somewhere beneath your larynx
in your time-honored farce
that silence drowns what's left unsaid
So, here we are
again
in the vortex
of our beautiful oblivion
those precious parts we chucked
into the jar
pressed puree without the lid on
splattering everything that ever mattered
with persistent stains
Author's Note
For Styxian: not sure how good a gift this is, but it's all I've got at the moment. :-)
Hat tip to Eve 6 for the heart in a blender imagery I bounced off of from their song "Inside Out"
Hat tip to Eve 6 for the heart in a blender imagery I bounced off of from their song "Inside Out"
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Re. Out of Sight, Out of Time
24th Dec 2022 8:15am
Re: Re. Out of Sight, Out of Time
24th Dec 2022 6:22pm
Thank you, friend. Hope the holiday season has, and continues to be, good for you. :-)
Re. Out of Sight, Out of Time
25th Dec 2022 5:17am
'' what does it means when it comes from you? ''
that line is a whole poem within itself.
this entire vibe resonates with me.
Much respect
that line is a whole poem within itself.
this entire vibe resonates with me.
Much respect
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Re: Re. Out of Sight, Out of Time
7th Jan 2023 7:10am
Thank you for your kind words. Always good to know something resonates, and particularly pleased that you're vibing with it. Thanks again!
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Re: Re. Out of Sight, Out of Time
7th Jan 2023 7:15am
As always? Oh, you're being awfully kind with that compliment. :-)
They did overplay the hell out of that song, didn't they, but I certainly never lost the resonance of the tendency or desire to toss one's heart into a blender and hit puree. Cheers :-)
They did overplay the hell out of that song, didn't they, but I certainly never lost the resonance of the tendency or desire to toss one's heart into a blender and hit puree. Cheers :-)
Re. Out of Sight, Out of Time
10th Jan 2023 3:08am
Hi Marie it's good to see some writing from you. I felt like your poem had an honest confessional energy to it and that is something I resonate with. I hope you have a wonderful New Year, full of peace, purpose and prosperity. (lots of good Ps!)
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Re: Re. Out of Sight, Out of Time
26th Jan 2023 4:30am
Thank you, Daniel. I hope you also have a fantastic new year.
Gotta love a good pee. (Yes, it's silly as hell, but I'm choosing not to resist)
Seriously, though, always pleased when you resonate with something, as it lets me know I'm on the right track.
Gotta love a good pee. (Yes, it's silly as hell, but I'm choosing not to resist)
Seriously, though, always pleased when you resonate with something, as it lets me know I'm on the right track.
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26th Jan 2023 4:30am
Re. Out of Sight, Out of Time
25th Jan 2023 2:59am
Re: Re. Out of Sight, Out of Time
26th Jan 2023 4:31am
Thanks! Glad you finally came by. You nudged me a while back, so I sat down and this happened. Thank you for the prompt. Much appreciated. :-)
Re. Out of Sight, Out of Time
2nd Feb 2023 11:04am