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Birthed
There's something about a pair of pants
this blinding white's sheen and glow
the hidden softness beyond reach of hand
the arrousing mound so briefly shown.
'Tis such a little hill you know
but in mounting one, one can find
the wealth of ages hidden below
the mother of all humankind.
Those misogynistic old white men sat in Rome,
properganderized a man
but I believe God gave great joyous moans
as She birthed Eve, the first, human!
this blinding white's sheen and glow
the hidden softness beyond reach of hand
the arrousing mound so briefly shown.
'Tis such a little hill you know
but in mounting one, one can find
the wealth of ages hidden below
the mother of all humankind.
Those misogynistic old white men sat in Rome,
properganderized a man
but I believe God gave great joyous moans
as She birthed Eve, the first, human!
Written by
Rew
Published 22nd Dec 2022
| Edited 23rd Mar 2023
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Well, someone's gotta speak up
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Re. Birthed
22nd Dec 2022 12:09pm
Beautiful poem
Women in general are the essence of societies
It is an essential element in the survival of societies
Greetings and appreciation to women all over the world
Women in general are the essence of societies
It is an essential element in the survival of societies
Greetings and appreciation to women all over the world
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Re: Re. Birthed
22nd Dec 2022 12:33pm
Re. Birthed
22nd Dec 2022 3:13pm
The chicken and the egg. I like the idea of God (if such exist) being a woman, That would freak out sooooooooooooo many Faiths. Of course if She exists She is hiding far away and not paying a great deal of attention to what is happening to Her creation. Regards, Robert.
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Re: Re. Birthed
22nd Dec 2022 3:40pm
Cheers Robert. Thanks for the visit & comment. Very valuable.
I don't for a moment believe what I wrote but
how astounded some folk would be if it were true?
But a big but is folk like Marjorie Taylor-Green or Lauren Boebart
would become the newer & younger & more vicious fraud trumpeting Trump
Regards from Rew.
I don't for a moment believe what I wrote but
how astounded some folk would be if it were true?
But a big but is folk like Marjorie Taylor-Green or Lauren Boebart
would become the newer & younger & more vicious fraud trumpeting Trump
Regards from Rew.
Re: Re. Birthed
22nd Dec 2022 3:46pm
...Regards, dear.
Seems to me these two are already there. Don't know about fraud but yes, these two are quite vicious. PS: de Santis of Florida may just be in line to block Trump; GOP voters already prefer him.
I seriously fear for the future of the US
Seems to me these two are already there. Don't know about fraud but yes, these two are quite vicious. PS: de Santis of Florida may just be in line to block Trump; GOP voters already prefer him.
I seriously fear for the future of the US
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Re: Re. Birthed
22nd Dec 2022 4:00pm
Cheers Robert
the "fraud trumpeting " is what trump's done for a couple of years about the election.
You're right to worry bout USA. de santis would out trump trump,
Given half the chance.
the "fraud trumpeting " is what trump's done for a couple of years about the election.
You're right to worry bout USA. de santis would out trump trump,
Given half the chance.
Re: Re. Birthed
Quite. And his discourse has not changed. PS: in regards to the two women, I believe Loren B had some hanky-panky in one of her businesses.
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Re: Re. Birthed
22nd Dec 2022 4:21pm
She's got such an evil twisted face I'm surprised anyone would do business with her.
Re. Birthed
22nd Dec 2022 6:46pm
From mother to mother earth. From one mound to beneath another mound.
Good stuff Rew.
Who'll take on Ron de Santis for the title in '24? The V.P?
Dan
Good stuff Rew.
Who'll take on Ron de Santis for the title in '24? The V.P?
Dan
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Re: Re. Birthed
22nd Dec 2022 7:16pm
Thank you for nice comment Dan.
As for de devil Santis I don't know.
I'd like to think that kamela Harris would wipe the floor with him
for POTUS. Time will tell.
As for de devil Santis I don't know.
I'd like to think that kamela Harris would wipe the floor with him
for POTUS. Time will tell.
Re. Birthed
22nd Dec 2022 8:40pm
What about young Biden getting the gig? Seems like a chap who knows how to scrape up a buck or two?
And he likes a party? Bring some fun back to the W.H? He knows his onions. Oil prices, gas prices, crack prices?
Not too good with lap-top's though?
Maybe H.C will throw her hat into the ring? She's had a few attempts. Maybe she's toxic to both sides now?
Can't see Don getting the nomination. Too crazy. Interesting though the political situation over there. SBF out on bail. 250 million. Where would he get that kind of dough? Even I don't have that kind of stash. 240 at a push!
Dan
And he likes a party? Bring some fun back to the W.H? He knows his onions. Oil prices, gas prices, crack prices?
Not too good with lap-top's though?
Maybe H.C will throw her hat into the ring? She's had a few attempts. Maybe she's toxic to both sides now?
Can't see Don getting the nomination. Too crazy. Interesting though the political situation over there. SBF out on bail. 250 million. Where would he get that kind of dough? Even I don't have that kind of stash. 240 at a push!
Dan
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Re: Re. Birthed
22nd Dec 2022 8:50pm
Biden's laptop will do for him.
It doesn't matter if there's anything there or not
Next year the GOP will make him so toxic they could use him as a weapon.
Interesting thing about money in USA politics. the crazies will invest in the craziest and crazily get a return on their investment.
Thank God I live on Venus...
It doesn't matter if there's anything there or not
Next year the GOP will make him so toxic they could use him as a weapon.
Interesting thing about money in USA politics. the crazies will invest in the craziest and crazily get a return on their investment.
Thank God I live on Venus...
Re. Birthed
22nd Dec 2022 8:58pm
It seems like the party who can blow up enough balloons wins the vote? You get what you vote for.
What are the fuel prices like on Venus? Is there a decent bus service? Any crack?
What are the fuel prices like on Venus? Is there a decent bus service? Any crack?
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Re: Re. Birthed
22nd Dec 2022 9:53pm
Re. Birthed
22nd Dec 2022 11:09pm
Re. Birthed
13th Mar 2023 6:09pm
I don't know what to believe anymore. Way, way back somebody talked about a rib? Kisses, Robert.
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Re: Re. Birthed
13th Mar 2023 9:07pm
Yes, " rib " sorry.
This is my take on Judeo-Christianities's G*D (and why not?)
And not meant to confuse anyone. Sorry!
Males have taken over all mainstream hardcore (fascist) religions (think Rome)
whereas in liberal religions (not hardcore, flexible) women get to serve.
There isn't any reason (if g*d exists) to suppose that it wasn't a woman.
Personally I don't think one does exist. Though If my dying entails great pain I guess I'll be calling out to one. Anyone of em or all of em, lol.
xxx
This is my take on Judeo-Christianities's G*D (and why not?)
And not meant to confuse anyone. Sorry!
Males have taken over all mainstream hardcore (fascist) religions (think Rome)
whereas in liberal religions (not hardcore, flexible) women get to serve.
There isn't any reason (if g*d exists) to suppose that it wasn't a woman.
Personally I don't think one does exist. Though If my dying entails great pain I guess I'll be calling out to one. Anyone of em or all of em, lol.
xxx
Re: Re. Birthed
14th Mar 2023 1:12pm
..........I was making a bit of a joke, being ironic..........That bit about creating a person from a rib is nonsense............maybe in a couple of thousand years when man can take a bit of DNA from one and abracadabra boom, a new being comes to life. Kisses, Robert.
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