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In the Moment
In the moment
of his coming,
he whispers in
unknown tongues.
Or is it that I haven’t
learned his language yet?
With him, I step
from my cluttered mind
into a space where only earth
and sky frame our acts of love.
of his coming,
he whispers in
unknown tongues.
Or is it that I haven’t
learned his language yet?
With him, I step
from my cluttered mind
into a space where only earth
and sky frame our acts of love.
Author's Note
My love takes me away from the confusion in my thinking.
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Re. In the Moment
17th Dec 2022 7:46pm
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Re. In the Moment
17th Dec 2022 7:58pm
Could be both an unknown "tongue" and you haven't learned his language yet. This is a great way to to cleanly write a dirty piece, we like it. Tight
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- Edited 16th Mar 2023 7:45pm
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