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Last Supper
I have died a thousand deaths
taken my last breaths
slowly over time
a poisoning of the mind
you would think this was a crime
but I smiled as I died
as love has ever been my guide
bite by awful bite
this my unpalatable plight
for your cooking is such a fright
as you serve supper with love in your eyes
taken my last breaths
slowly over time
a poisoning of the mind
you would think this was a crime
but I smiled as I died
as love has ever been my guide
bite by awful bite
this my unpalatable plight
for your cooking is such a fright
as you serve supper with love in your eyes
Published 11th Dec 2022
Author's Note
Written for a comp: Delightfully bonkers #6
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11th Dec 2022 9:34pm
Thank you, the juxtaposition was my goal but was afraid I'd missed the mark. Your words have deeper value than you know.
12th Dec 2022 6:23pm
Sounds like a 21st century, Langston Hughes version of that verse about "that ugly food that stanks" from that section of "Rapper's Delight".
Only missing the Kaopectate reference
I like your flow
Only missing the Kaopectate reference
I like your flow
12th Dec 2022 7:08pm
Hi, I can't find this poem but just read 1/2 a dozen of Langston's poems. F-ing awesome voice that I've never heard before. So thank you for pointing me his way and if you could, could you repost the poem you mention?
15th Dec 2022 3:16pm
Then you have lived a thousand lives my dear APPS.
And hence the wisdom of being a shaman.
Poisoning just makes you more resistant next time.
Perhaps it's a crime, but who committed it?
If love is your guide then you are on a good path.
'for your cooking is such a fright' LOL!
Perhaps that's what killed you this time around.
I am a good cook damnit! :p
Going to serve you up a nice poison platter for your mind.
Loved this! Good luck in the comp. ;)
And hence the wisdom of being a shaman.
Poisoning just makes you more resistant next time.
Perhaps it's a crime, but who committed it?
If love is your guide then you are on a good path.
'for your cooking is such a fright' LOL!
Perhaps that's what killed you this time around.
I am a good cook damnit! :p
Going to serve you up a nice poison platter for your mind.
Loved this! Good luck in the comp. ;)
23rd Dec 2022 9:40am
24th Dec 2022 4:58pm
Congratulations on the win! Right up my street. It was so serious and plaintive, and I did NOT see the ending coming. I spat tea at the screen! Hilarious.
