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Concept
every horror
mini horror
demi horror
rocky horror
whatever
I've been through
in the past few months
every lapse in gratitude
every war zone day
every tear filled night
every deceitful person
for every maddening frustration
every night of fitful sleep
every comfort
far out of reach
there's the abstract
concept
of balance
equilibrium
hope
tangled in a fine gold chain
tiny two point font
whispers of joy
a paradigm shift
stuck between gears
healing sunshine
in a box
that can't be opened
yet
mini horror
demi horror
rocky horror
whatever
I've been through
in the past few months
every lapse in gratitude
every war zone day
every tear filled night
every deceitful person
for every maddening frustration
every night of fitful sleep
every comfort
far out of reach
there's the abstract
concept
of balance
equilibrium
hope
tangled in a fine gold chain
tiny two point font
whispers of joy
a paradigm shift
stuck between gears
healing sunshine
in a box
that can't be opened
yet
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Re. Concept
10th Dec 2022 8:15am
It is curiosity for the future that keeps so many of us going, isn't it?
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10th Dec 2022 2:54pm
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11th Dec 2022 8:15am
Re. Concept
11th Dec 2022 12:20pm
Dear PD,
The absolute definition of hope. Hope for a better day, better life, better minute. What’s never quite clear is how we’ve affected someone else’s world by our own gritty determination to get through another day. Your powerful poem has me re-evaluating my own tolerance to deal with life’s mini and maxi miseries as I try to swing that pendulum back to some lightness and goodness. Wonderfully reflective piece for me. H🌷
The absolute definition of hope. Hope for a better day, better life, better minute. What’s never quite clear is how we’ve affected someone else’s world by our own gritty determination to get through another day. Your powerful poem has me re-evaluating my own tolerance to deal with life’s mini and maxi miseries as I try to swing that pendulum back to some lightness and goodness. Wonderfully reflective piece for me. H🌷
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Re: Re. Concept
11th Dec 2022 8:51pm
I always love it when a poem is helpful to someone. Thanks for letting me know.
Re. Concept
12th Dec 2022 7:37am
A paradigm is the perfect way to describe the daily frustrations. Waiting for it to swing back to normal.
Wonderful ink 😁
Wonderful ink 😁
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Re. Concept
12th Dec 2022 2:18pm
I've come back to this a few times the last couple days to consider its tone, images, feel and message. It has a kind of sober impact, like the numb after the trauma, a world weary erudition to its address, interesting abstract construction in the close especially.
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13th Dec 2022 3:33am
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Re. Concept
14th Dec 2022 8:58pm
Oh goodness, yes. Balance is that thing that's always just out of reach for me. I'm not actually even sure what it would look like....
Great write
k
Great write
k
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