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On That One Day At The Beach
Some friends and I
drove out to
the beach where one
of us spotted these two
chicks and tried to hit on
them only to have one
hot chick kick him so hard in the nuts.
drove out to
the beach where one
of us spotted these two
chicks and tried to hit on
them only to have one
hot chick kick him so hard in the nuts.
Published 4th Dec 2022
Author's Note
This is my first komo poem in which something embarrassing happens to one of the author's friends at a local beach.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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4th Dec 2022 4:05pm
4th Dec 2022 6:29pm
Actually, this poem is a fictional one... but thanks for the comment, anyway.
