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Lowest Low
laughter
is so distant now
isn't it my love
love
eyes meeting
and hearts melting
hands
touching and caressing
sensation and embraces
kisses
lips pressed together
cohesion of souls
and the thunder rolls
lightning strikes
explosions
dusts
...gone now
supine on the lowest
of low
she looks up
weary.
is so distant now
isn't it my love
love
eyes meeting
and hearts melting
hands
touching and caressing
sensation and embraces
kisses
lips pressed together
cohesion of souls
and the thunder rolls
lightning strikes
explosions
dusts
...gone now
supine on the lowest
of low
she looks up
weary.
Published 27th Nov 2022
Author's Note
Depression
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27th Nov 2022 7:51am
Dear G,
The last stanza sums it up perfectly. For me, the exhaustion of trying to put in the tiniest effort of coping through the day to day is so prevalent in this piece. I found myself really feeling the inability to take a deep breath that cleanses the soul. Amazing write. H🌷
The last stanza sums it up perfectly. For me, the exhaustion of trying to put in the tiniest effort of coping through the day to day is so prevalent in this piece. I found myself really feeling the inability to take a deep breath that cleanses the soul. Amazing write. H🌷
27th Nov 2022 10:31am
Thanks so much for dropping by and reading...always a pleasure to read your comments.🌹
27th Nov 2022 10:24am
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29th Nov 2022 7:46pm
Hi Poetspeak thank you so much for dropping by, always an honour to be read by you. 🌹
28th Nov 2022 1:27am
When you are at your low you to try to make good memories with your friends. Keep on writing.
29th Nov 2022 7:47pm
