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SHE is a rebel by nature...
SHE is a rebel by nature,
a Shrew only for HIM.
His eyes, his figure, muscles -
They are dearer to her than anything.
SHE is a desert without rain,
And for her, HE, like a spring,
Will draw paths with moisture.
HE is a guide to the thirst for life.
SHE is calm as a lioness,
HE is a recalcitrant mountain lion.
Inside her, the volcano lava builds -
And this is her passion and anger.
SHE is still waiting, burning inside,
And an explosion will be inevitable...
Only in her magma, expiring,
HE realizes: the world is beautiful.
a Shrew only for HIM.
His eyes, his figure, muscles -
They are dearer to her than anything.
SHE is a desert without rain,
And for her, HE, like a spring,
Will draw paths with moisture.
HE is a guide to the thirst for life.
SHE is calm as a lioness,
HE is a recalcitrant mountain lion.
Inside her, the volcano lava builds -
And this is her passion and anger.
SHE is still waiting, burning inside,
And an explosion will be inevitable...
Only in her magma, expiring,
HE realizes: the world is beautiful.
Author's Note
Just wanted to say Happy Thanksgiving! holiday to everyone in America (and everywhere else too). I hope you all have a wonderful time with friends and family or whatever else you choose to do! ;) I can't believe we are at the end of the year already. Crazy...
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Re. SHE is a rebel by nature...
23rd Nov 2022 7:27pm
You sure know how to set up a mood with this phenomenal poem and photo…
Thank you for stirring my hunger even more
Damn you’re good
BIG DRUMSTICK LIKE
Thank you for stirring my hunger even more
Damn you’re good
BIG DRUMSTICK LIKE
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Re: Re. SHE is a rebel by nature...
23rd Nov 2022 8:00pm
Always looking to set the right mood Poetspeak. And damn! I love phenomenal. :p I thought the photo captured what I was looking for perfectly. ;) Cheeky look. Haha, it doesn't take much to stir your hunger but it's fun anyway. lol Damn! right I am good. Figured you for a breast and thigh man... but drumsticks too. Well the whole bird really. ;)
Re. SHE is a rebel by nature...
23rd Nov 2022 7:28pm
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23rd Nov 2022 8:01pm
I love that it was a great read Ron and thanks for being here to always share with me. I am thankful for all of you guys. During tough times it's nice to have somewhere to go that's away from everything else. An outlet for reading, writing, and sharing encouragement, support, and having some fun. :) Love and light back atcha.
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Re: Re. SHE is a rebel by nature...
23rd Nov 2022 8:01pm
Potent with all the ingredients, I love that! But drop the mic is even better. :p Really happy I could get you to drop the mic for me. I guess I need to pick that up now. lol Happy Thanksgiving to you as well Ted. Now I need to make sure I have all the ingredients to cook for tomorrow. Yes, I can cook damnit! :p
Re. SHE is a rebel by nature...
23rd Nov 2022 8:14pm
Hot damn, girl! The passion oozing from this poem is palpable. Gets the fires ignited🔥Always love reading your work.
Happy Thanksgiving to you. Sending good thoughts your way for you and your family.
Happy Thanksgiving to you. Sending good thoughts your way for you and your family.
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23rd Nov 2022 8:21pm
Hot damn, girl! is the best! ;) The passion oozing is so I could pull you in with me Mary. I love igniting the fires and burning stuff. Somebody called me a little arsonist but I can't remember who damnit! lol I always love your comments and appreciate them so much. Thank you for the good thoughts and smiles. I hope you and your family have an awesome Thanksgiving too.
Re. SHE is a rebel by nature...
23rd Nov 2022 9:06pm
Everyone secretly loves a rebel. A succinct stirring of the poetic buffet. The final line punches into the soul like a profound sonnet.
In international spirit, from Wales, Diolchgarwch hapus.
In international spirit, from Wales, Diolchgarwch hapus.
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23rd Nov 2022 9:19pm
Ah yes! that's true Rob! And I do love serving a poetic buffet full of variety and all you can eat or stirring the cauldron. :p I suppose it depends on what's going on. lol "punches into the soul like a profound sonnet" hell yeah! There is a special kind of beauty in being a passionate rule breaker. ;) That's quite a word! Love it...
Re. SHE is a rebel by nature...
23rd Nov 2022 11:02pm
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24th Nov 2022 7:12pm
Hey Aj, always love flowers. ;) I hope you are having a wonderful holiday. I am working on cooking and all that at my Mom's house. You know making way too much food that will last a long time. :p So are you a Turkey or Ham guy? I suppose I am not being a rebel today. Thank you so much for stopping by and saying hello.
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24th Nov 2022 9:48pm
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25th Nov 2022 12:30pm
So you are easy then. lol ;) Or perhaps that means I need a Turkey and a Ham. Or perhaps you are the Ham. lol So many possibilities.
Re. SHE is a rebel by nature...
24th Nov 2022 00:02am
You can be my sexy rebel anytime. Very hot picture. You need a picture of yourself in the buff. Keep on writing.
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24th Nov 2022 7:14pm
A sexy rebel is the best kind right? ;) Oh yeah, I thought that picture really worked with the poem so well. Hot, cheeky, and sassy... Oh boy, I would be in big trouble if I did that. :p Even rebels can get into trouble, I suppose they are best at it really. ;) And I really appreciate you stopping by to share your thoughts.
Re. SHE is a rebel by nature...
24th Nov 2022 00:04am
"Last night a little dancer, came dancin' to my door
Last night a little angel, came pumping on my floor
She said come on baby, you got a license for love
And if it expires, pray help from above, because
In the midnight hour, she cried more, more, more
With a rebel yell she cried more, more, more
In the midnight hour babe more, more, more
With a rebel yell more, more, more
More, more, more! "
-Rebel Yell by Billy Idol
You as well KX, Happy Thanksgiving. Yes, you are a rebel wanting "more, more, more!" LOL!
Last night a little angel, came pumping on my floor
She said come on baby, you got a license for love
And if it expires, pray help from above, because
In the midnight hour, she cried more, more, more
With a rebel yell she cried more, more, more
In the midnight hour babe more, more, more
With a rebel yell more, more, more
More, more, more! "
-Rebel Yell by Billy Idol
You as well KX, Happy Thanksgiving. Yes, you are a rebel wanting "more, more, more!" LOL!
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24th Nov 2022 7:14pm
LOVE that song Leo, so perfect... absolutely more, more, more, more ... And some really dirty dancing to go along with that rebel yell. So glad you reminded me of that song. I want so much more. And some really dirty dancing, pumping on the floor. Oh yeah. I am thoroughly worked up by that song now. lol Thanks so much for coming by and sharing your thoughts and an awesome song too.
Re. SHE is a rebel by nature...
24th Nov 2022 7:19am
Dear K,
From the rebel wanna be, this is what I would be. The temptress. The seducer. All while never lifting a finger. I’m so glad you could use that picture of me 😂 I was worried the angle would make my butt look big😉
Happy Thanksgiving! X
H🌷
From the rebel wanna be, this is what I would be. The temptress. The seducer. All while never lifting a finger. I’m so glad you could use that picture of me 😂 I was worried the angle would make my butt look big😉
Happy Thanksgiving! X
H🌷
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24th Nov 2022 7:15pm
I can tell you are a rebel Honoria, so ready to let loose. ;) The temptress and seducer, oh yeah you know you are. Haha, of course I wanted to use a picture of you and that angle is perfectly sexy. That butt and that look has me all excited. lol Oh yeah, I could definitely... * nevermind, innocent look * I hope you are having an amazing turkey day! X
Re. SHE is a rebel by nature...
Incredibly elegant as well as sexy. Riding that fine line hehe.
I was gonna come back to read this but you had me with the pic. What can I say, the Devil is still but a man 😈
Wonderful ink. And have a happy day of thanks? Not sure what it would be there haha.
I was gonna come back to read this but you had me with the pic. What can I say, the Devil is still but a man 😈
Wonderful ink. And have a happy day of thanks? Not sure what it would be there haha.
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24th Nov 2022 7:16pm
Haha, that is a fine line indeed. Elegant and sexy; that's perfect. Roping you in with the picture, I know the way to a man's ... * nervermind, innocent look * Even the Devil can't resist. After all many of the fallen angels came down because they lusted after mortal women. Yep, women are to blame for all sin. lol But it's so much fun isn't it? It's Thanksgiving to me... and thank you, I hope you are having a wonderful holiday!
Re. SHE is a rebel by nature...
26th Nov 2022 9:17pm
Hey Kristina:)
So so sexy. haha
Love how you caped SHE & HE. It was great reading how they complimented
each other in your poem. It was like each line inspired the next. Working together
to create this piece. For me it was like reading a tennis match:)
Yes- the world is beautiful.
Loved the closing!
Hope you had a wonderful Thanksgiving chica:)
So so sexy. haha
Love how you caped SHE & HE. It was great reading how they complimented
each other in your poem. It was like each line inspired the next. Working together
to create this piece. For me it was like reading a tennis match:)
Yes- the world is beautiful.
Loved the closing!
Hope you had a wonderful Thanksgiving chica:)
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Re: Re. SHE is a rebel by nature...
28th Nov 2022 3:23pm
Hey beautiful chica... I love how you think. Like watching a tennis match is perfect. But we will always win the game, they don't stand a chance. ;) I know you look awesome in a tennis skirt too. :p It's always important to compliment each other in a relationship and keep that passion alive, it's a passionate game after all. And when you both win that is the absolute best of all. I love that you liked the caps. I thought it added some emphasis to help drive the points. So happy you loved the closing. I hope you had an incredible Thanksgiving Adel and that you won many tennis matches. ;)
Re. SHE is a rebel by nature...
27th Nov 2022 1:22am
Thinking about the “need each other like the lungs need oxygen” dynamic again a song springs up, “Blood of Eden”, by Peter Gabriel.
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Re: Re. SHE is a rebel by nature...
28th Nov 2022 3:38pm
Ah yes! so true... That's such a wonderful quote. I had never heard that song, I always have to do listen to the songs you mention. It's quite a treat getting your comments and thoughts on how it relates to songs. That is a really great song.. "the darkness still has work to do" it always does... So many amazing lines. I will definitely be adding that to my playlist. Thinking of the song from Dorothy - A Beautiful Life too...
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2nd Dec 2022 10:42pm
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3rd Dec 2022 12:32pm
This is absolutely how I give thanks! ;) Being sassy and snarky to get things all worked up. lol And then getting what I need so I can be even more thankful. :p I think that's a great way to give thanks, right? Well that and turkey with all the fixings. That's just a must for Thanksgiving.
Re. SHE is a rebel by nature...
3rd Dec 2022 3:18am
Very intriguing!
Like a warning display that we forget to read completely, until it overwhelms us!
Your description isn't warning enough, I think. This reads as a how-to when creating a tornado!
Yet, it's alluring as hell, so doom awaits the readers! Lol.
Good stuff!
Like a warning display that we forget to read completely, until it overwhelms us!
Your description isn't warning enough, I think. This reads as a how-to when creating a tornado!
Yet, it's alluring as hell, so doom awaits the readers! Lol.
Good stuff!
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3rd Dec 2022 12:32pm
I am here to intrigue you Styx. In the strangest ways because I am chaotic and strange. lol A warning display, haha. Love it. I do come with a disclaimer, you have to accept that; sign in blood. Okay, that's maybe a bit much but still... :p I want to be overwhelmed. That earthquake, tornado, and volcanic eruption. All the natural phenomena's and some unnatural ones too. Pulling you in so I can rip you apart. :p Okay, that last part is a bit extreme too. lol
Re. SHE is a rebel by nature...
4th Dec 2022 3:10am
Like the definitions alternating back and forth in these lines. Tantalizing and depth reaching.
Outstanding stuff Kristina.
Outstanding stuff Kristina.
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4th Dec 2022 11:54am
Always fun to spar back and forth in the lines. ;) Always want it to be tantalizing and depth reaching. To pull you in and make you feel the things that I feel too. I absolutely adore outstanding. And you are outstanding Wally and I adore you too. ;)