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This poem is called FOREVER....
There was so much I didn't understand..
Like....
How could the Universe be ....Endless...
.....How could this be..????????...
....
And..... Time.....
When did it begin....????
....When would it end....?????
....
Wow...thinking about these things....
....hurt my head...
Yes...they gave me a headache...
....
And....
God's Love....for me...
This was Endless....too...?????
....
So many things were a mystery.....
.....
But....when I thought more....
I saw....
it didn't matter that....
the Sky...went on forever.......
or that Time.....was timeless....
....
No...
what did matter....was....
that God's Love was...
Unlimited.....
....
........I couldn't understand it...
but....
I was so glad it was.....😊😊😊
...
Yes.....
looking up in a night....
full of stars
It didn't matter that they......
..... were shining.....
from the beginning of time.
......
But what did matter was.....
God's love for me...
would Shine Bright....
...
.....for even longer... :)
.....
Like....
How could the Universe be ....Endless...
.....How could this be..????????...
....
And..... Time.....
When did it begin....????
....When would it end....?????
....
Wow...thinking about these things....
....hurt my head...
Yes...they gave me a headache...
....
And....
God's Love....for me...
This was Endless....too...?????
....
So many things were a mystery.....
.....
But....when I thought more....
I saw....
it didn't matter that....
the Sky...went on forever.......
or that Time.....was timeless....
....
No...
what did matter....was....
that God's Love was...
Unlimited.....
....
........I couldn't understand it...
but....
I was so glad it was.....😊😊😊
...
Yes.....
looking up in a night....
full of stars
It didn't matter that they......
..... were shining.....
from the beginning of time.
......
But what did matter was.....
God's love for me...
would Shine Bright....
...
.....for even longer... :)
.....
Published 13th Nov 2022
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23rd Mar 2024 5:35pm
This poem beautifully captures the awe and wonder of contemplating the vastness of the universe, the concept of time, and the boundlessness of God's love. The juxtaposition of the perplexity of understanding the infinite with the comforting realization of the eternal nature of love is poignant. The repetition of "endless" and "timeless" reinforces the theme of infinity, while the simplicity of the conclusion underscores the profundity of the message—that amidst life's mysteries, the constancy of love is what truly matters. The imagery of the night sky and the enduring brightness of God's love offers a sense of reassurance and hope. Overall, it's a heartfelt reflection on the incomprehensible and the reassuring constants in life.
