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HIDDEN LINES
To imagine
SHE WAS EVERYTHING
TO ME
I can’t depend
on MY LATIN EYES
when MY IMAGINATION
is out of Fucking FOCUS
SHE WAS EVERYTHING
TO ME
I can’t depend
on MY LATIN EYES
when MY IMAGINATION
is out of Fucking FOCUS
Author's Note
THANKS
LILDRAGONFLY
FOR THE TITLE
LILDRAGONFLY
FOR THE TITLE
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Re. HIDDEN LINES
11th Nov 2022 12:53pm
Poem captions the picture well with this nude drawing missing the lines which would give the woman face.
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11th Nov 2022 1:47pm
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11th Nov 2022 2:46pm
Hoi hoi
Lovely avatar
Lovely artwork
Lovely poem
Ahhhh…., what’s not to like here!
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus
Lovely avatar
Lovely artwork
Lovely poem
Ahhhh…., what’s not to like here!
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus
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11th Nov 2022 3:00pm
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11th Nov 2022 2:46pm
Hoi hoi
Lovely avatar
Lovely artwork
Lovely poem
Ahhhh…., what’s not to like here!
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus
Lovely avatar
Lovely artwork
Lovely poem
Ahhhh…., what’s not to like here!
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus
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Re. HIDDEN LINES
11th Nov 2022 3:01pm
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11th Nov 2022 3:51pm
Although the words of your poem are short,
But it takes us to imagine a world of passion and naughty
An exciting poem that makes you travel in your imagination for pleasure and ecstasy
All I can say is amazing
MP
But it takes us to imagine a world of passion and naughty
An exciting poem that makes you travel in your imagination for pleasure and ecstasy
All I can say is amazing
MP
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Re. HIDDEN LINES
11th Nov 2022 8:33pm
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11th Nov 2022 9:31pm
Really awesome lines Trome.
You can find so much meaning in the hidden lines.
I can think of so many situations where things might be out of focus.
Alcohol. lol or toxic relationships.
Often our thoughts are in line with what we see in so many ways.
That last stanza is amazing.
Really love this Trome!!!
You can find so much meaning in the hidden lines.
I can think of so many situations where things might be out of focus.
Alcohol. lol or toxic relationships.
Often our thoughts are in line with what we see in so many ways.
That last stanza is amazing.
Really love this Trome!!!
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Re. HIDDEN LINES
11th Nov 2022 10:35pm
Eyes reveal the unsaid things. The innocence, the flirtations, and the naughtiness all emanate from the eyes.”
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12th Nov 2022 11:42pm
So true... Ah the coy begging for it, the flirtations begging for it, and the naughtiness begging for it. lol All emanate from the eyes... ;)
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13th Nov 2022 1:24am
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12th Nov 2022 2:38am
Drink the sex on the beach and she will become clearer. Keep on writing.
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12th Nov 2022 3:34am