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Prayer
God
Thank you
For this life
For giving me
Everything I need
This life I live today
Is enough, I am content
I may not have all of my wants
But I have all my needs in life met
My heart is full of gratitude to you
You always answer my call when I'm lost
Your light is always there to guide me
When I have to face the darkness
I won't be where I am now
Without you through the years
I owe you so much
I have nothing
Just my faith
In you
Lord
Thank you
For this life
For giving me
Everything I need
This life I live today
Is enough, I am content
I may not have all of my wants
But I have all my needs in life met
My heart is full of gratitude to you
You always answer my call when I'm lost
Your light is always there to guide me
When I have to face the darkness
I won't be where I am now
Without you through the years
I owe you so much
I have nothing
Just my faith
In you
Lord
Author's Note
#13 of 30 Entry for NaPoWriMo 22
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Re. Prayer
11th Nov 2022 11:55am
What a beauty
Offering thanks
Being content with what you have
Love the format and message
BIG LIKE
Offering thanks
Being content with what you have
Love the format and message
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. Prayer
14th Nov 2022 2:14pm
Re. Prayer
There's a wonderful poetic essence to your prayer of thanks that immediately captures one's attention and really imparts the spirit of true gratitude. It's a joy to see such love and pride in belief.
The impact of your clever and creative structured layout made me think of a butterfly 🦋... which I always associate with promise and hope...
Thank you for sharing yourself and your lovely work.
Much love and respect,
🌹B
The impact of your clever and creative structured layout made me think of a butterfly 🦋... which I always associate with promise and hope...
Thank you for sharing yourself and your lovely work.
Much love and respect,
🌹B
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Re: Re. Prayer
14th Nov 2022 2:33pm
Dear Blue,
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my simple poem. I appreciate it much and the RL❤️
Summer
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my simple poem. I appreciate it much and the RL❤️
Summer
Re. Prayer
12th Nov 2022 1:59am
Dear S,
I think you have just warmed god’s heart with this lovely piece.
“I may not have all of my wants
But I have all my needs in life met” I thought was a great reminder for me. Especially when I’m whining about something I didn't get, don’t need but think I want. 🙄
Beautiful poem. H🌷
I think you have just warmed god’s heart with this lovely piece.
“I may not have all of my wants
But I have all my needs in life met” I thought was a great reminder for me. Especially when I’m whining about something I didn't get, don’t need but think I want. 🙄
Beautiful poem. H🌷
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Re: Re. Prayer
14th Nov 2022 2:39pm
Dear S,
Thank you so much for the support. I appreciate your gracing my poem with your uplifting comment and RL❤️🌹
Summer
Thank you so much for the support. I appreciate your gracing my poem with your uplifting comment and RL❤️🌹
Summer
Re. Prayer
13th Nov 2022 8:23pm
I wanna say you did it all yourself but that would be insulting to you, I assume? God does have an amazing ability to offer guidance to those that feel his presence. But it also took you to find that inner strength, to carry yourself onwards, hence the stylish forward directional arrow text you have depicted. I like how you've done this! I edited this comment a few times to find the right words. As you know, I can be blunt sometimes but that's how I'm made up. My Mum says I should try to be more like an angel fish than a shark, lol. It got me thinking! ;-)
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Re: Re. Prayer
14th Nov 2022 2:43pm
Re. Prayer
14th Nov 2022 1:39pm
Hoi hoi
The form is beautiful, as is the prayer itself.
You posting yours, reminds me of what I have to do.
Thank you.
Kind regards, Gus
The form is beautiful, as is the prayer itself.
You posting yours, reminds me of what I have to do.
Thank you.
Kind regards, Gus
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Re: Re. Prayer
14th Nov 2022 2:51pm
Thank you Gus. I appreciate your visit and comment on this simple poem. Much appreciated.
Anonymous
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20th Nov 2022 5:44pm
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Re: Re. Prayer
20th Nov 2022 5:51pm