The Gruesome Night

Truly gripping...

Thank you for your kind words
I have been working on it for a month.
Regards
James

I enjoy your use of symbolism and the optimistic end. Well done!

Thank you,
There are two poems about the same thing spliced together.
Regards
James

Beautifully crafted piece 💕 love the positive message it has conveyed😊
And great reading, dear James. It's always so nice to listen to your voice overs. 😊

Thank you for your words of strength.
I have been working on the endings to counter the heavy and depressing beginnings. I find recording my peoms to be a good way to copy right my work, even if I don't send all of them out. I am glad you enjoy the readings.
Regards
James

LOVE the night! And the reading was perfect. I felt that 'static' background sound matched the picture and added to the emphasis of the darkness as well. There is so much beautiful imagery of the night... and even the extended darkness ushered in by the rain that I love so much. Cats under cars, the river swelling over it's banks. That path of a fox made me think of a woman. lol I know that's way off base in the context but hey that's where my mind went. :p Night was final, lingering eternal really pulled me in. The thought that the sun would never rise and being creatures of the night for an eternity. But eventually the kiss of the sun will come. I love the metaphor of the sun embracing the night. Warming him with her touch... Beautiful.

Thank you for reading and Listening,
I often stare into the night outside the door, it is always beautiful. Last night the wind ripped through the trees under a full moon. I could have written another poem about last night. I am glad you share the love of the night my friend.

You got it, it's always about a woman, the woman of the sea, the woman of the night, the woman is always there. Because women are beautiful they blend into the beauty of the literary world I aim to create.
Now I'm not saying men are ugly, but they don't inspire me the same way. If anything, I use men as the ugly in my writing. I am sure there are people who think the opposit and I am glad we all have different views.

You can live in an endless night. sleep all day and live in Bars and clubs. If I had loads of money, I would live in the night. But I am poor, so I drink a beer and stare at the night.

I am glad you enjoyed the final message, it is inspired by love, the way one can warm the heart of another, I believe it to be true.

regards
James