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please numb my mind
Please tell me a story
To numb my mind
Drown me in details
Tie me up in your life
Those beautiful threads
I just want to know more
Than the stories in my chest
They rattle around my bones
And dance against my heart
I just want to know, ya know?
What story you'd tell me
To numb my overthinking mind
To numb my mind
Drown me in details
Tie me up in your life
Those beautiful threads
I just want to know more
Than the stories in my chest
They rattle around my bones
And dance against my heart
I just want to know, ya know?
What story you'd tell me
To numb my overthinking mind
Published 26th Oct 2022
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26th Oct 2022 11:47pm
Stories? Lol, I might bore you with mine, rather like Ted Striker in that Airplane comedy film in 1980. 🤣
27th Oct 2022 00:08am
Quietness in someone's chaos
Great read Queen of Darkness
Love and light
Ron xx
Great read Queen of Darkness
Love and light
Ron xx
27th Oct 2022 1:58am
hello beautiful I feel the deep need here
this reaches the poet's heart... beautiful ❤️
this reaches the poet's heart... beautiful ❤️
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16th Nov 2022 5:06pm
A little escapism always helps whenever the mind is running too fast.
I liked your delivery on this, it's honest and classic.
Well done.
I liked your delivery on this, it's honest and classic.
Well done.
16th Nov 2022 6:45pm
