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When I'm Down And Troubled
don’t try to
save me
don’t try to
change anything
(about what’s
going on in my head)
just listen
don’t try to
solve me
don’t try to
change me
don’t try to
fix me
just listen
don’t try to
calm me
don’t try to
dry my tears
if you must
speak
speak words that
filter past the pain
“i’m here”
words that
cut through the fog
“i hear you”
speak words
that show you care
“i love you”
most importantly
if you must
speak words
that show you are there
“i’m listening”
then
just listen
© 2022 Raibeart Bruis
save me
don’t try to
change anything
(about what’s
going on in my head)
just listen
don’t try to
solve me
don’t try to
change me
don’t try to
fix me
just listen
don’t try to
calm me
don’t try to
dry my tears
if you must
speak
speak words that
filter past the pain
“i’m here”
words that
cut through the fog
“i hear you”
speak words
that show you care
“i love you”
most importantly
if you must
speak words
that show you are there
“i’m listening”
then
just listen
© 2022 Raibeart Bruis
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