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Hurt
He was knifed in the back
Forty-three times by his ''friends''
Only once by an enemy.
That blade missed his heart, he suvived
The cuts made by his ''friends'' hurt so deeply
He eventually died
Still not understanding the reasons
For such treason and cruelty.
Forty-three times by his ''friends''
Only once by an enemy.
That blade missed his heart, he suvived
The cuts made by his ''friends'' hurt so deeply
He eventually died
Still not understanding the reasons
For such treason and cruelty.
Published 1st Oct 2022
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- Edited 29th May 2023 7:45am
1st Oct 2022 7:23pm
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12th Oct 2022 5:39pm
It's almost metaphorical, where being stabbed by a "friend" hurts more.
Nice write.
Nice write.
12th Oct 2022 9:50pm
