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A New Beginning
Demolished..
A Fragment Of What I Used To Be,
Broken,
Shattered,
Futile Debris..
A New Beginning,
A Seed To A Stem,
I知 Starting To Grow,
I知 Thriving Again...
I Searched Through My Heart,
Looked Into My Soul,
I Made A Decision,
To Take Back Control..
A Phoenix From The Ashes,
Ferociously Burning,
Resurrection Complete,
Life Slowly Returning..
Beaten And Bruised,
But I Did Not Give In,
You Did Not Beat Me,
I Did Not Let You Win..
I Am Still Standing,
And I Will Grow Stronger,
I Don稚 Deserve,
This Pain Any Longer..
I Am Reborn,
I Feel Happy At Last,
Now Moving On,
Forgetting The Past..
I値l Always Treat Others,
With Kindness,
Respect,
Look After My Loved Ones,
I値l Care And Protect..
No One Will Ruin,
And Stop Me From Giving,
The Love That I Have,
For As Long As I知 Living..
A Fragment Of What I Used To Be,
Broken,
Shattered,
Futile Debris..
A New Beginning,
A Seed To A Stem,
I知 Starting To Grow,
I知 Thriving Again...
I Searched Through My Heart,
Looked Into My Soul,
I Made A Decision,
To Take Back Control..
A Phoenix From The Ashes,
Ferociously Burning,
Resurrection Complete,
Life Slowly Returning..
Beaten And Bruised,
But I Did Not Give In,
You Did Not Beat Me,
I Did Not Let You Win..
I Am Still Standing,
And I Will Grow Stronger,
I Don稚 Deserve,
This Pain Any Longer..
I Am Reborn,
I Feel Happy At Last,
Now Moving On,
Forgetting The Past..
I値l Always Treat Others,
With Kindness,
Respect,
Look After My Loved Ones,
I値l Care And Protect..
No One Will Ruin,
And Stop Me From Giving,
The Love That I Have,
For As Long As I知 Living..
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C
28th Mar 2012 10:12am
Dear god, Clayton. Your poems never fail to touch my heart. I respect this one personally for not giving up. Never give up, Clayton! Life is full of wrecking balls, but they're only there to test you.
"Human kind cannot gain anything without first giving something in return. That is the law of Equivalent Exchange. Back then, we really believed that to be the worlds one, and only truth."
-Fullmetal Alchemist.
I chose this quote because it seems perfectly suiting to your situation, and the ONLY part of it that I disagree with is "Back then, we really believed that to be the worlds one, and only truth." I still believe this is the worlds one and only truth, on top of that, I think this is a good quote to base your decisions off of. Don't think "What can I give to get this back," think "What did I gain from losing this?"
I hope I hepled, Clayton. And as always, you can message me for direct personal help at any time.
-C
"Human kind cannot gain anything without first giving something in return. That is the law of Equivalent Exchange. Back then, we really believed that to be the worlds one, and only truth."
-Fullmetal Alchemist.
I chose this quote because it seems perfectly suiting to your situation, and the ONLY part of it that I disagree with is "Back then, we really believed that to be the worlds one, and only truth." I still believe this is the worlds one and only truth, on top of that, I think this is a good quote to base your decisions off of. Don't think "What can I give to get this back," think "What did I gain from losing this?"
I hope I hepled, Clayton. And as always, you can message me for direct personal help at any time.
-C
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:o)
28th Mar 2012 10:21am
Thanks loads as always for your help mate,
and I love the quote-
"What can I give to get this back," think "What did I gain from losing this?"
It's taken me a while but I've now realised that I "AM" worth more,
I "CAN" move on
I "WILL" be happy again..
I was turning into a spiteful, hateful person which I didnt like..
I wanted to be better than that..
So here's to a new beginning :o)
(Sorry for the essay :o) Hope your cool mate)
and I love the quote-
"What can I give to get this back," think "What did I gain from losing this?"
It's taken me a while but I've now realised that I "AM" worth more,
I "CAN" move on
I "WILL" be happy again..
I was turning into a spiteful, hateful person which I didnt like..
I wanted to be better than that..
So here's to a new beginning :o)
(Sorry for the essay :o) Hope your cool mate)
re: :o)
28th Mar 2012 10:26am
I'm glad you like the quote, really! And you ARE better. You DO deserve better! You're a true mate, Clayton! You deserve it as good as you want! And don't worry, things are ALWAYS cool with me.
Now let us clink our champagne glasses and enjoy a drink that may very well be our last! To a new beginning!
-C
Now let us clink our champagne glasses and enjoy a drink that may very well be our last! To a new beginning!
-C
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re: :o)
28th Mar 2012 10:34am
Hahaha. ^^ Hey, did you ever look into getting Skype? If you did, did you make an account? :D If you did, again, you should private message me your Skype ID! :D
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28th Mar 2012 6:39pm
Yey to you my dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your happier turn in life is showing off a little bit lmao!!!!!!!!!!!
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re: !!!!!!!!!!
28th Mar 2012 7:22pm
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29th Mar 2012 6:09pm
If you've never seen the end, you're never going to appreciate the re-start.
Nice write. (:
Nice write. (:
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31st Mar 2012 6:31pm
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re: :)
31st Mar 2012 6:50pm
Thank You Miss Dreams..
My poems are going in the right direction now anyway :o)
Thanks for your time and comment :o)
My poems are going in the right direction now anyway :o)
Thanks for your time and comment :o)
Re: Fantastic!
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2nd Apr 2012 2:19pm
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re: Re: Fantastic!
2nd Apr 2012 3:23pm
Hey,
Thank you loads.
I noticed only today that my poems are starting to get a little brighter :o)
Thank you again :o)
Thank you loads.
I noticed only today that my poems are starting to get a little brighter :o)
Thank you again :o)
A New Beginning
1st Jun 2012 10:57pm
Great strength and passion in your words. I love to see that.
I do like the challenge life keeps throwing at me, mostly at the hands of another, I'm not one to crumble and fall.
Excellent expression and write. :)
I do like the challenge life keeps throwing at me, mostly at the hands of another, I'm not one to crumble and fall.
Excellent expression and write. :)
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Re: A New Beginning
10th May 2013 11:38pm
This is by far the greatest poem I've read on here!
You used your words perfectly, Thank you for this
piece of art! ;)
You used your words perfectly, Thank you for this
piece of art! ;)
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re: Re: A New Beginning
20th May 2013 6:51pm
Lol :-)
Only just seen this comment..
Don't know what to say...
speechless...
thank you :-)
Only just seen this comment..
Don't know what to say...
speechless...
thank you :-)
re: re: Re: A New Beginning
20th May 2013 10:25pm
Re: A New Beginning
26th Jul 2014 6:08pm
I Am Reborn,
I Feel Happy At Last,
Now Moving On,
Forgetting The Past..
I値l Always Treat Others,
With Kindness,
Respect,
Look After My Loved Ones,
I値l Care And Protect..
No One Will Ruin,
And Stop Me From Giving,
The Love That I Have,
For As Long As I知 Living... <------ !
Spot on Justme ") Loving the pen you're wielding in this personal piece!
Great message of strength, and new beginnings are always good thing for sure!
Always
Broomie
I Feel Happy At Last,
Now Moving On,
Forgetting The Past..
I値l Always Treat Others,
With Kindness,
Respect,
Look After My Loved Ones,
I値l Care And Protect..
No One Will Ruin,
And Stop Me From Giving,
The Love That I Have,
For As Long As I知 Living... <------ !
Spot on Justme ") Loving the pen you're wielding in this personal piece!
Great message of strength, and new beginnings are always good thing for sure!
Always
Broomie
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Re: A New Beginning
16th Nov 2017 2:04pm
Replies like this give me so much inspiration thank you so much for taking the time to write.
Have an amazing day :-)
Have an amazing day :-)
Re. A New Beginning
1st Mar 2019 9:37am
Re: Re. A New Beginning
1st Mar 2019 9:43am
Thank you Angel.. I was just reading through old poems as you commented..
I kinda like this one too lol
I kinda like this one too lol