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Coco
I haven't lived in the real world since you died
in my mind you're still alive
if I think I'll break into tears
so I don't think, don't feel
I just futurise our next encounter
which I know is never coming
but I hold onto anyway
because I miss you
and I can't accept that you're gone
© Indie Adams 2022
in my mind you're still alive
if I think I'll break into tears
so I don't think, don't feel
I just futurise our next encounter
which I know is never coming
but I hold onto anyway
because I miss you
and I can't accept that you're gone
© Indie Adams 2022
Published 26th Sep 2022
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26th Sep 2022 3:46am
Dear I,
The longing and grief is palpable in this write. Your thoughts are very relatable. Has me hoping there’s a heaven or Valhalla where we can all meet again. I’m very sorry for your loss. H🌷
The longing and grief is palpable in this write. Your thoughts are very relatable. Has me hoping there’s a heaven or Valhalla where we can all meet again. I’m very sorry for your loss. H🌷
26th Sep 2022 4:00am
26th Sep 2022 6:53am
I'm very sorry for your loss. The worst feeling for me was the few moments in the morning before I remembered they were gone. It's a long road to acceptance, I hope it gets easier for you. This took me right back to when it was fresh, and made me realise I'm finally at a point where I can remember without overwhelming grief. Thank you
