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Failed attempt to break me
People have taken shots at me over and over again, hoping I'll implode.
And no one even noticed the old me withering away inside like a dying rose.
Though the innocence has crumpled away like the petals on a hot sunny day.
If only the pain was short term.
I still found comfort in the damage that I have risen from.
And no one even noticed the old me withering away inside like a dying rose.
Though the innocence has crumpled away like the petals on a hot sunny day.
If only the pain was short term.
I still found comfort in the damage that I have risen from.
Published 22nd Sep 2022
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22nd Sep 2022 12:39pm
Dear M,
This piece reminded me of how we can strengthen our own resolve. Maybe our innocence of trusting others becomes cautious and we build an armor casing for protection we figure out how to stop hurting ourselves from others unkindness. I wish it didn’t have to be like that but I guess this is how the world works. As usual, I really like your direct speech and relatable topics. H🌷
This piece reminded me of how we can strengthen our own resolve. Maybe our innocence of trusting others becomes cautious and we build an armor casing for protection we figure out how to stop hurting ourselves from others unkindness. I wish it didn’t have to be like that but I guess this is how the world works. As usual, I really like your direct speech and relatable topics. H🌷
23rd Sep 2022 2:01am
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